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The writing quality isn't bad, but what bothers me is that the MC was a normal guy raised and educated by normal people, he gains a little power and out of nowhere his personality becomes almost like that of an indifferent and selfish god , I'm not saying he shouldn't be like that, but at least give him a reason and time for his personality to change.
deathstroke just does his job and is a villain, and he doesn't even need to kill so many people to dominate the planet, he's just doing what he wants. And the main point that I didn't like (personal taste) is him being arrogant for something he gained just by being born viltrimite and that those who can't grow as much or as fast as him should be punished or something, it reminds me of celestial dragons from one piece. again, it's just my personal perception and taste, you don't need to change anything to please anyone.
If you feel uncomfortable writing, just skip what is not important to the story and at least leave an understanding of what happened. The most important thing is to do what you like so you don't end up getting bored and stopping the translation, anyway thanks for the chapter.
It was better they hadn't asked for anything in the third wish, they just got a curse.
Hey author here's an idea, see if you like it, the mc could start using compressions to train or fight, compressing stones would become more difficult with each attempt helping the raw power of his power to increase, which is better than lifting huge weights , and for combat it could compress the air, after a sudden decompression of the air it would explode, distracting or damaging anyone nearby, compressing graphite would transform it into diamonds, Superman has already done this if I'm not mistaken and I don't know if the diamond It has value in the world of MHA, but it's worth a try, anyway, good chapter!!