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  • Hagan_5502
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    Thanks for the chap

    Ch 35 Jujutsu High
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  • Hagan_5502
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    Thanks for the chapter!!

    Ch 4 Chapter Four
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  • Hagan_5502
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    Thanks for the chapter!!

    Ch 24 Chap 23: Beautiful morning
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  • Hagan_5502
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    The writing quality isn't bad, but what bothers me is that the MC was a normal guy raised and educated by normal people, he gains a little power and out of nowhere his personality becomes almost like that of an indifferent and selfish god , I'm not saying he shouldn't be like that, but at least give him a reason and time for his personality to change.

    Ch 3 She's not the one
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  • Hagan_5502
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    I liked the chapter but I have a question, why does the MC bother to fight in the war against the Shinigami?

    Ch 4 Final Training
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  • Hagan_5502
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    The josei can actually stay, however can't the mc just use his powers to give her a human face? I mean, I think she would like it, but I don't know the character well enough to say that.

    Ch 12 Thank you for the support!
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  • Hagan_5502
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    Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 264 Broken Path
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  • Hagan_5502
    Hagan_55021mth
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    Thakns for the chapter!

    Ch 44 Chapter 43: The Neutral Zone Part 3
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  • Hagan_5502
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    Thanks for the chapter!

    Ch 43 Chapter 42: The Neutral Zone Part 2
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  • Hagan_5502
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    Thanks for the chapter!

    Ch 41 Chapter 40: The Tutorial – Third Mission
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  • Hagan_5502
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    Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 39 Chapter 38: The Tutorial – First Mission
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  • Hagan_5502
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    I understand now, well, if you work the mc's psychology well, it should give good character development, there isn't much of that in the webnovel.

    Ch 6 first mission
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  • Hagan_5502
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    deathstroke just does his job and is a villain, and he doesn't even need to kill so many people to dominate the planet, he's just doing what he wants. And the main point that I didn't like (personal taste) is him being arrogant for something he gained just by being born viltrimite and that those who can't grow as much or as fast as him should be punished or something, it reminds me of celestial dragons from one piece. again, it's just my personal perception and taste, you don't need to change anything to please anyone.

    Ch 6 first mission
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  • Hagan_5502
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    It could have the Mc Villain tag then I wouldn't need to waste time watching this kind of thing.

    Ch 6 first mission
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  • Hagan_5502
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    If you feel uncomfortable writing, just skip what is not important to the story and at least leave an understanding of what happened. The most important thing is to do what you like so you don't end up getting bored and stopping the translation, anyway thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 33 Chapter 32: The Passage of Time – Interlude 4; When Dreams Come True
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  • Hagan_5502
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    Thanks for the chapter !

    Ch 251 Splendid New Era
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  • Hagan_5502
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    Thanks fot the chapter.

    Ch 18 Chap 17: The Flaxans
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  • Hagan_5502
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    It was better they hadn't asked for anything in the third wish, they just got a curse.

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  • Hagan_5502
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    Hey author here's an idea, see if you like it, the mc could start using compressions to train or fight, compressing stones would become more difficult with each attempt helping the raw power of his power to increase, which is better than lifting huge weights , and for combat it could compress the air, after a sudden decompression of the air it would explode, distracting or damaging anyone nearby, compressing graphite would transform it into diamonds, Superman has already done this if I'm not mistaken and I don't know if the diamond It has value in the world of MHA, but it's worth a try, anyway, good chapter!!

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  • Hagan_5502
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    Thanks for the chapter!

    Ch 17 Chap 16: Omni-man (R-18)
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