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Nafriza_Arg174mthCommentedHonestly, I've read this far, but the dialogue still feels unnatural, I thought it would be better from the start, and the use of POV, sometimes when it's POV mc, feels like 3rd POV
"Hey there! You seem pretty down, so I thought I could cheer you up," I said, grinning widely. "You might be wondering why I put your hand on my head. Well, it's simple. I'm absolutely adorable, so I'm confident that I can bring you joy and chase away that sadness."- Nafriza_Arg174mthCommented
really a novel like this?
"Nights Eye Crow, a woman who only knows murder... You will be under my protection, and no being will dare to touch you without my authority. So long as you remain by my side, no man or God will dream of harming you." Gilgamesh's words carried the authority of a king, a monarch who had ruled the heavens and the earth, lived through wars, and slaughtered enemies. - Nafriza_Arg175mthReplied to EtherealStar
it seems like the system's punishment is the MC's future if he fails, it's more accurate to say it's the "consequence"For example, if you fail to defeat or kill someone who wants to kill you, the "consequence" of that is "death."
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duh, that woman seems to have a big sin so the animals don't like her 😂😂
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It was only when these talented muggles entered Hogwarts that they discovered it was magic
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MC doesn't know "Mana" right? Muggles in that world can't feel mana, what makes MC different, even those talented in magic don't know there is "Mana" they don't think about their strange abilities as magic
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well authors, you know generally they will think "back in the past 1990" not another world, well unless they are crazy people who have too many books
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??? author I want to ask, how does MC know he's not in his world? Did he go straight to the magic place here so he knew he wasn't in his world? if he was in the muggle world, he should have thought that he had only returned to the past and not another world
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Those who have read will know why I rate this only this way. And for those who haven't read, the MC is quite naive, many of his actions are stupid even after he learned a lesson, the MC's thinking still hasn't grown. At first you will think the MC is a realistic person, but the more you read you will find out the MC is just stupid
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yes the protagonist is not a good leader, but that depends on the author, if the author is brain dead then so be it, at least I hope the author makes the MC grow before becoming the leader
"There you are wrong, they have not taken anything from us, they did it with the Mate'yia tribe, a tribe that is hostile to us, we have no reason to fight for them, I have no reason to fight alongside them, not after they killed my people in their act of cowardice, preferring to kill their brothers instead of rebelling against their slavers," exclaimed Sukai angrily to his son. - Nafriza_Arg175mthReplied to Kaz_Qwerty
one tribe used the thanator as a mount
Which was very similar to that performed by the Omaticaya clan, the big difference was that instead of performing the Tsaheylu with a Banshee, the young warrior did it with a Thanator, which is why the tribe did not have many warriors in their tribe, something they compensated for with the ferocity with which they fought. - Nafriza_Arg175mthCommented
Serious? traitors generally sell information 😭
<As for the doctor, before I called any doctor, I looked for one who had a record, who was corrupt or a traitor within the Corporation, I haven't changed as much as you think Musashi, I just lost my innocence and ignorance and now I have something more important than myself to protect, doing anything to protect him, even if I have to kill, I will kill, if I have to lie, I will lie, I will do whatever I have to do to make my child live> - Nafriza_Arg175mthCommented
Hah so naive, but lol this describes women very clearly 😭😭 no matter how much experience she has, as long as her brain is not intelligent, she will generally remain naive
<When I found out I didn't know what to do. Do I tell anyone?, do I tell my father?, I answered all those questions with a no, I knew what would happen if I told them what had occurred. I could put the unborn child in danger, just because of what some people within the corporation itself might think of a bastard, fatherless child of Saburo Arasaka's Daughter, so I decided not to tell anyone, besides. I wanted my son to live on his own terms free from the interference of others, out of the cold and empty corporate life. Without the shadow of Arasaka tormenting him. As I would have liked to live my life> - Nafriza_Arg175mthCommented
protestant 😭
Yeah, I know, my father had to accept the Orthodox Faith to continue to have their support but I don't see a problem with that, as it would be really strange if Dacia, an Orthodox nation was ruled by a Non-Orthodox Royal Family, my grandfather was an exception. - Nafriza_Arg175mthCommentedCh 8 Greedy Woman
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sauce?
"Yorokobe Shonen, Shojo." - Nafriza_Arg175mthCommented
Use this to refresh your mind
Who he was kidding with? Of course, the first thing his eyes fell was a doujinshi of Piccolo and Vegeta, YAKH!