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I loved it. this story have perfect plot and character devolepment. I would like if there a bit more touch in how writer describe mc's power. Maybe a bit specific. I look foward how mc's power evolution and how he's handle it. This story almost perfect. It's nothing but a perfect story. What I really like in this story is the balance of the plot and the character. The character development as good as the plot. I didn't expect too much on mc since in begining he's naive. But mc's development get better as the story goes. Another plus value is this story not boring at all. Every time a new chapter release it's leave me with curiosity what's going on in next chapter.
i like her
Sorry, I dont know why but I think something is missing. Adrianna is great, she's supposted to be great wife for Cedric. I know she's pretty and smart in description. Pure heart and have genuine feelings for Cedric may I add. It's heaven to a man for have a wife like Adrianna. But until this chapter, I just feel that their chemistry is still lacking. Yeah, maybe because in the beginning of this story time move so fast that cedric suddenly already have a wife. Is there any character development in next chapter?
interesting
I hope mc's couple will be an independent woman not his subordinate and she has a life of her own. boring just see in another story mc's couple depends on mc and always follow mc anywhere. I'm sorry if my grammar isn't correct. I'm not native speker and still learning. hope this coment doesn't offend you and if It happened I'm sorry.