as a new and upcoming author this guy has done a good job with the novel so far. not some generic everyday trash. try it out people

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The Author is definitely a newbie but I hope he gets better as he grows. Read it if you are free and have nothing to do. I expect better things from the author. I think they should get an editor to sculpt the sentence in a better way. Also the pace is kinda broken so I hope that improves. Afaik this will be a multiple volumes/books novel.

Good Chapter. I think the pace is a little fast. 35 Chapters in he is already a Grandmaster

How much does the Book of Prophecy tell? Kai is talking as if he has read the novel?

The overall idea of the story is really nice but the author is a newbie. Writing style and tempo is terrible. I'd really like if the author got an editor who could rewrite thebstory with better words

Bro the author is f k i n g b i t c h. He wrotes superb novels and then drops them. Or have poor updates. F k him........................pls author update the novel i am dying to read it pls pls pls

Once you read something like Lotm you will get higher standards. Lotm is epitome of novels. But still, the author has done a good job in writing this novel

The MC is nice and observant but the plot feels a bit forced. Sometimes the MC acts mature but at other times he acts as a fool. Overall it is a nice novel for timepass reading. Author-kun I request you to stop making action scenes like that of a bollywood movie. In most fight scenes the MC first gets beaten and then suddenly he gets a "Crazy idea" and manages to defeat the monster. Please try to fix that. Try to make it look a bit natural. Also do you have a discord server? If so please post the link. You can also ask for readers view there to improve your writing.

This is one the best novels I am currently reading other that the Old Monsters (SS, SG, LoTM etc.) The writing quality is fairly good for a new novel. The Story development is going okay for a novel of this type. The characters can become more alive somehow by giving proper backstory instead of bits and pieces of past events. World Background is growing and I hope to see more of it in the future. Question Author-Nim Do you have a discord server? if Yes then please share like in Synopsis? If not I can help[img=recommend]. Also what is your discord ID. I am unable to send FR.

I am at Chapter 327 and right now Ren only has 2 abilities:- Shadow Clone and a half Shadow door. Does he get more, does it get better? Please tell me

why no updates?

Everything is perfect. Just like Oracle Paths but better. No info dumps or long system messages, Self made system so no annoying oracle limits, MC actually has a brain. And of course no Harem. Just love this Author. The suspense and dread of Crawlers is same as that of the Digestors from oracle paths. I just wish to know if this will somehow join the Oracle Paths story line.

Next chap when

lesss gooooo