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Chapter 7: Blowing Amazingly (Please Follow)_1detailI Fabricated the Techniques, but my disciple really mastered them?Eastern · Half a clear breeze- Fallen_Daoist27mthCommentedCh 6 Working Nobody and his first Novel
- Fallen_Daoist28mthPosted
The story had potential but the author made all the characters brain dead. In the battle against the unicorn riders the so called elite troops, the MC fights against them, and kills most of them by simply blocking their vision and stabbing them and their Elite troops? Even if they couldn't personal defend themselves, your telling me that the don't have the teamwork necessary to block an attack for their comrade? And as an army commander, you believed that an ordinary soldier fought off elven troops that almost killed your entire squad, walked away practically unharmed and you don't suspect anything? And now the elven princess, she told her enemy when her soldiers would attack, (putting aside the fact that our MC readily believed her), and has the power to talk to MC from like another dimension but can't even defend herself when the MC rushes her? It makes no sense that whoever taught her magic didn't even teach she common spells like magic shield and magic missile
- Fallen_Daoist21yrCommentedCh 33 Tea Time
- Fallen_Daoist21yrCommented
I think the author had something like this in mind
All of which were recently made. Atop his neck and over his shoulders was a golden chain embellished in black gemstones. His extravagant attire was recently manufactured in his fledgling textile industry and was in the style of the Tudor era, which had yet to exist in this timeline.