It's alright my man! Errors happen to our text sometimes😄. Shoot I used to use an editing software and it left a HUGE wall of text at the end of every chapter😄 so you aren't alone. Don't let it discourage you buddy, keep pushing!👍
Very good start to the story, I'm definitely going to enjoy reading more. And on the first chapter I think you have an error with your editing software, it left a bunch of text🤣
The comfortable canopy bed he woke up on is draped with translucent woven curtains. Around the walls were picture frames with curving borders, gothic windows on thick drapery, and intricately carved furniture of ash wood and marble.
This is a fantastic story, I love the way the beginning is starting out. The characterization, the imagery and the writing quality are good for the story. I hope this gets more recognition
Amazing World Buildings, Great Characters, and fantastic humor quality however, the dialogue could use a little improvement. Other than that this story is great and I look forward to keep reading it.
I absolutely love this story, I'm going to enjoy the constant updates for these chapters. Keep it up man, and I hope for succsses as you continue to write this story!
This is where I think my story is currently at. Also I'd like to add chapters will be added on here weekly rather than daily. If you have any constructive criticism or positive comments I will take them. Thanks🙏