Review Detail of Jannix_3954 in My Vampire System

I have been putting off a review for a while now, but after reading 1.5k plus chapters, I can give an honest opinion. I really love this book and especially the characters. In the beginning it's all understandable how the characters act and have good reasoning behind their actions. Obviously I expected the fan service. The characters and world building is one of the best on this place. Not because it's a unique twist to it. But there is actual character development that is reasonable. There isn't to much loopholes and the arcs are throughly planned out. *Spoiler* The only thing that I find wrong with this is after the Dalki war arc. I feel that there is way to much going on and not enough time. I feel that the author could have gotten away of ending the book. If it was because of not having enough chapters to end it I feel he could have extended the war part. Then he could have written another book being called something like "My Celestial Syestem" or something like that. It becomes to hectic and the pacing is way out of order. I find myself not being able to remember any of the new characters sometimes when their name is brought up. Like how powerful they are, their problems, their background, and what they goals are. I also feel that since he wanted to end the book he decided to kill off characters that are side characters. And wrote it down to something mysterious happening while he was away. Dont get me wrong the celestial part are still very good. But the problem is that since it's the same book I feel we got spoiled by how good the pacing was and the character building. I also belive that a second book could have had more weight to Quin becoming a celestial and him missing out on things. That way the author could have taken his time and rebuilt his world again about a world without Quin and him finding his way again. It would have been a finality as MVS would have ended with him being just a vampire and the new book would have began with him being a celestial. But it's hindsight now. I still feel like the book is still good as the old characters carry the arcs as the author made them so well. If the book ends really strong then I can easily put this in the top 10 on WN.