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Author did u dropped that novel!!?? Anyway I've suggestion for u about the ending of this novel. It's like this... MC'll become OP in the world where he transmigrated, and then he'll visit his main world (I mean Earth). He'll then punish his stepfather (who lived on his mother's fortune) by infecting his cock with a rare disease, and his step-siblings (who aren’t his mother's biological children) by corrupting their mind thus making them criminals. In this situation his mother will be in a helpless situation. Then he'll appear and solve her problem, and of course let her divorce that scum first. And then he'll introduce her to a gentleman. Yeah, they'll live happily ever-after. 😁
I immensely enjoyed your book. Thank you so much for sharing your book with us. 🙏🏼🖤 We'll be waiting for nxt volume. But I notice that there's something u could've improved and that is 'The Status Panel'🪪. I think u should've written in bold letters within bracket like those system novels. And I wish u'll add it in nxt volumes. It would be very much pleasing to read then. 😌
Well author, then according to the plot it’s also destined that MC will die at Luke's (protagonist) hand. So, what will he do? Will he let the protagonist and heroines go their own? Orrr he's just pushing 'em to fight 'The Demon King' while he's secretly developing by snatching their opportunities (as he know the plot) and then kill in one shot!?? 😎😈
Well it’s gd enough! Waiting for new chapters. Btw can u plz give us some spoilers about the next cultivation lvls that MC goanna cultivate in divine realm cz he's already in 'Divine Emperor' realm, and there're only two realms left (celestial immortals, primordial ancients)! And also what r the power lvl of those Gods and Goddess (i.e. God of Sun, Moon Goddess, Goddess of Life, Godess of Death, God of Space And Time etc. etc.) in divine realm?
Tnks author from the core of my herat to gift us this jem. It's a villain novel indeed, and more importantly I like it. 😈😎 . . . [FORTUNATE EVERGREEN DEMONIC CELESTIAL BUTTERFLY GOD] I have no complain about the first part of the novel, but later it became a little bit cliche, and ending isn’t gd (well It's actually trash). There is something author could have indeed improve i.e. his butterfly evolution... "Fortunate Evergreen Demonic Celestial Caterpillar">> After becoming artificial celestial caterpillar he should've consume actual spirit of four ancestor sacred beasts thus would've made him an original one. Then by devouring both 'hell' and 'celestial realm' creatures and there consciousness, and also 'world-tree' thus making him a.... @#*** caterpillar. Later when he became a 'true god realm' expert he should've transferred himself itno a "... Butterfly" (an OP God)!!! 😇😎
WHO WAS THE MYSTERIOUS MAN IN LAST CH!?? [1] AN ERROR ABOUT MYTHOLOGY [2] Well author this is a gd one, honestly It's a masterpiece for both 'Mythology' and 'Villain Genre' lover like me. It’s well written. But there is still a mystery remain and that's who is the black-hodded individual in last chapter the one that invite here for a tournament. And I also think u should've given it a different ending like make MC the king of Paradise world; Ares the king of heaven who actually gave the power to MC, and Hades the king of underworld. And also u could've make some appearances of primordial deities like Chaos, Nyx, Erebus, Gaia and Uranus. Also why didn’t u just kill that annoying Poseidon (I guess by putting him on a trail for raping Medusa and some of his others mischievous deeds). Note: There is also an error u made about mythology (I don’t if it’s deliberate or not) that's Chronos/Khronos/Chronus is the primordial god of time and Cronus/Cronos/Kronos, the titan isn’t the same diety.
AUTHOR PLEASE REMOVE THE 'HAREM' TAG. IT’S OK IF THERE IS MORE THAN ONE FEMALE LEAD (I THINK THREE OR FOUR IS FINE). Honestly it’s an average novel, but it has something interesting (probably the narrative or MC's character design like his decision making I guess) that make it stand out among the rest. I think author should organise the polts a little more. And it'll be better if thete are more 'son of destiny/heaven', and MC will deal with 'em normally (not like othe villain novels i mean fu***ing heroines).
This novel has a lots of potential and it could've become one of the best xianxia novel, but unfortunately author dropped it. * I know I'm not mistaken by saying that atleast I trust my intuition cz I've a big experience of reading nearly a thousand fantasy novels or comics of xianxia, wuxia, xuanhuan, eastern fantasy, sci-fi, murim, eastern fantasy and other genres.
Author I've a little confusion about this system (Root), and before being clear about it I'm not gonna start this novel. Is it like a normal system like what we read in various novel? And who created this system? What r it’s functions? Who control it? Btw a system or Al is modern technology but after reading first few chapters It's like a 'medieval fantasy' setting then how can it come from cz MC isn’t a transmigrator!??