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Honestly... this is probably the best 'Beach Games' arc I have ever read. It's not even close. The whole idea is actually really novel, and I love how you've implemented it. I've read plenty of books that have a beach day, and this has by far taken the cake.
This has honestly cleared every bar I need in a novel. The characters are well developed, even relatively minor characters. The main cast is incredibly likable and entertaining. The world building is phenomenal because it sets up almost endless possibilities, allowing for room for character development and multiple story arcs that never fail to satisfy. I absolutely have fallen in love with this novel, and I eagerly await each chapter.
Side characters that interact with the main characters of the current story arc are worth seeing. It fleshes out those characters. Other fights would feel like filler IMO, but considering that I enjoy your writing style in general I am sure I would enjoy the chapter anyway.
I am honestly addicted to this story. I only have a single complaint and that is that I cannot seem to get enough of Kat & Company. If you ever have the opportunity to do a mass chapter release I would be forever grateful.
Another amazing work of art from Xincerely. I am thoroughly in love with the authors' style of writing. The way all the plot hooks come full circle and even side characters get their own conclusions. Everything is so well fabricated. The story, characters, and settings are enthralling to read about. I was captivated and I will definitely be reading this multiple times over. 10/10
I noticed a small discrepancy. Between the rewritten chapters and the ones you left relatively the same. You changed the timeframe from 5 years to 2 years. This was not corrected in the unedited chapters. Thought I would bring it too your attention. Fantastic Work on the revision though.
Honestly, I loved the whole thing so far. I trust your judgemnt and I am sure you will deliver something even better. Every book has been a masterpiece so far. Much Love! Take your time and we will be patiently waiting. I CAN'T WAIT TO SPEND MY COINS!!! [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]