author welcome back i thought you would drop this book thank god u didn't pls update chapters

the first to 30 chapters are good quality but the 2nd volume is kinda disappointing like you'll get tired seeing the ardoros continent every start of the chapter and like how big it is and how the author always describes the character.

my favorite voice line of nasus

what universe is this? is it still avatar?

i think the author is imagining himself as the mc as he writes this

me to cause i always watch family guys

hey anyone who's bothered about the character name repetition like every sentence there's name hachiman

i just have one problem the character's name repetition is annoying like every sentences

hello author when will you continue the Fate Chaldea Alternative Records cause i like it and i thought its drop

i like the concept of the story its great but the latest chapter is kinda disappointing

bro im losing motivation reading this the story is forced like who tf name their idol hoho .from thug to pushover

i thought you drop it

the start of the story reminds me of lotm

the chapter becomes so disappointing like an assassin becoming chuuni

the start of the story is good but he's already op then you also add the power of shadow monarch shadow monarch and beast core like its just so broken and the you also add the diabolos cult bruhh like tf

the story seems rushed like how can a genius like kisuke did not think that and they create it in just a day. the are just amateurs at best not genius

bro if pokemon verse has common sense it will be dangerous

hey do you know other fanfiction about arcane? It's okay if it's Chinese I'm just gonna translate it

the story is good but i found a big plothole because how can he improve for 3 years when he always play 1v1 against the mentor

bro plothole already the zaun in that timeline called undercity