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Yan_of_Salt9mthReplied to MaximillionIts more like 9 levels and percentages like level 3 bottom would be <50% towards level 4, middle would be >50% towards level 4, and peak would be like >99% towards level 4. The exact percentage are a mystery but that the general system xianxia uses for this stuff. Think of the percentage as EXP to next level
All cultivation levels are divided into nine levels. And these nine levels are also divided into three distinct layers. Bottom, Middle, and Peak.- Yan_of_Salt1yrReplied to Yan_of_Salt
The formating is messed up but like lines to separate it from the story
This paragraph has been deleted. - Yan_of_Salt1yrCommented
Bai Xiaochun?
Yuan "I don't know, uncle. What are my options? I want to never die and be powerful." - Yan_of_Salt1yrCommented
There's a reason why sword cultivators are always so feared.
It might have a positive effect that he might receive more support from the sect or might have a negative effect since the sect would see him like a prodigy that might put him in unnecessary spotlight which could get him in some trouble. Even if he wanted to disclose his cultivation he first had to get his crane sword skill to level 4, then even at level one cultivation with the help of technique he could fight a cultivator of the foundation realm. - Yan_of_Salt2yrPosted
Writing quality is very good, very minor spelling mistakes(gendered words sometimes mismatched, couple words are missing a letter or have a wrong letter turning it into another word) overall you wouldn't really notice the mistakes and generally won't be missing any information due to the mistakes. There are some noticeably cringe moments in the book but overall, it doesn't make the book worse. The story development is excellent. The author puts a lot of effort into the story and how it develops. The story lacks much of the info dumps commonly seen in the Vr gaming genre as the story takes more of a wait-and-see approach in understanding how the world works. The story develops outside the Vr world and the author creates a unique world that is not earth to help the reader suspend their disbelief and avoid large info dumps. Overall the story so far is very good and interesting and doesn't feel like a bore to read. The story is still very early in its development but still has interesting plot points that engage the reader. For fans of the Vr genre, this is a treat that is different than other Vr genre books with how there is a real story outside the game and how the main character isn't overpowered or super serious about the game.