I had dropped the novel when the system mc got the system. Boy was i wrong. Binges the whole thing in a day. Badass mc.

Very out of character for the mc. Author sama plis redo this or provide some explanation in coming chapters why mc behaved this unrationally. Maybe some curse?

One of the best HP oc inserts out there.

Novel is full of plot holes. Many interactions are extremely forced and happens just for the sake of plot development . In the first few chapters we have mc fooling anbu by pretending to be unconscious, trying out scroch style before mastering leaf/water walking exercises. Wouldn't recommend.

Amazing fanfic. For those of you who feels that there are lots of plotholes, wait till you read atleast chapter 27. The revelations can explain most of them. Goog job Author-sama. Please don't drop this!!!

Tabolin knew the 'Name of the wind' . Nice reference!

The main character is a complete idiot. He doesn't think before acting and his decisions are easily accepted by the rest. Has a pretty op fruit but does not spent much time exploring it as he'd rather play the hero.