ok so what does rebirth have to do with this so far. it ok I guess, I kept wanting for something to happen but I now just feel mislead by the title

I Am now more inclined to drop all of your stories, because in my mind you're just going to drop them in the middle anyway. why get invested.

more please. I know that I am not the only one waiting hoping for more of this great novel. I know you have other projects and enjoy them as well, but this is the novel that lead me to you as a writer.

sorry I just can't. it's just to unbelievable. that four year old would be running around doing these things and every adult in the area is like "yeah this is ok". I mean really? even hinting at flirting? kinda gross there. I don't care how old you made this character soul, that body is of a four year old.

great story. well written. MC is good. side character's are likable. Though it starts off as a common trop, plot flows nicely and evolves in to its own story. very few grammar mistakes. waiting for more. 😀😀😀😀

new name is great can we get a new chapter to go long with it

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

can we have a new chapter, please. this is a really good story.

think this would be a much better story if there was more actual story. maybe the author should write an accompanying cookbook or maybe rethink whether or not they're actually trying to write a story or a cookbook. I keep hoping that maybe the next chapter might get on with the story, but I am very doubtful.

this is so addicting, I love this story.

oh that's just funny. 🤣🤣

this is adorable.

this has got me hooked

getting more and more interesting

is good so far

fun so far

this story has got me hooked

storyline is starting to shape up.

is good so far

very similar to MVS.