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Takatou Yogini >>>> Zet. Takatou Yogiri menang (1A), sedangkan Zet kalah (3B) Kesimpulannya, Lawrance tidak akan bisa melampaui kakaknya, bagaimanapun caranya. Note: Dari pada memilih kekuatan zet dari dota 2, kenapa tidak memilih kekuatan Takatou Yogiri, Battler Ushiromiya, Sai Akuto, Ren Fuji, Ren Amamiya, atau mungkin kekuatan Faetherine, dan masih banyak lagi. Kekuatan zet dari dota 2 jelas sangat lemah, bahkan Artoria Pendragon jelas akan sangat mudah mengalahkan zet. Tolong buat ulang cerita ini dan ganti kekuatan karakter selain zet. Minimal buat karakter dengan kekuatan minimal 1B.
Maybe it's because you're lazy to create or think about the storyline? Or are you too lazy to write it? Hmm... Nor am I tahMaybe it's because you're lazy to create or think about the storyline? Or are you too lazy to write it? Hmm... I don't know either comrade🤔🤔🤔
In my opinion, fellow true dragons should be given the prefix name "vel" like other true dragon names in tensura, such as the example of "Vel'danava" "Vel'zard," "Vel'grind, "Vel'dora". So it should be given the prefix "Vel" to be better. Thank you
Good story. But I will give my advice, it should be that Mc should not act naïvely by giving the necklace, and should not have to give the necklace to angels, except to Gabriel alone. There is no need to give the necklace to other angels, even if they protest just let them go, there is no need to be naïve in giving!!
Please, don't wear the character tsugumi yuriichi, because it's ugly bastard! Mending pake characters such as gilgamesh, gojo satoru, and more op and handsome characters, anyway don't pack tsugumi yuriichi characters, because it's ugly! And don't say "it's up to me, this is my novel and fanfic" don't say that bastard! You also have to think about the reader as well, if the addict does not like it, yes please replace the better one!!! Again, don't use the character tsugumi yuriichi!!!
Bro buat novel dunia asli, tentang seseorang yang kembali jauh ke kemasa lalu sebelum negara-negara lain dibentuk. Tujuan sih mc itu untuk membuat negara atau kerajaan, dengan ingatannya tantang masa depannya. Dan juga jangan lupa tentang system yang siap membantu sang mc untuk mendapatkan kekuatan juga. Semogah aja di dengar permintaan saya.... Ya, kalau tidak, ya, gpp