What the hell why Luffy tired? He didn't suffer any damage in this story. So rush and poor writing.

Time doest match. Luffy have to suffer at least 10 hour from Magellans poison. The he have to eat almost hour so when he reached level 6 it was almost 12 hour later. Only than ace was taken away. They reached level 5.5 without any fight so ace shouldn't be taken away this sooner.

Luffy become way too smart in this. Luffy won't ask questions about why Zoro continue fight. Also he won't show respect for he's opponent even if he show it he will never say it. He will only think and say I will defeat you with my serious pr something like that

Why sword can't be frostmourne?

Hey make he's reverse spell into whatever attack he adapted he can use it back. Example sukunas slash when he adapted to it he's reverse spell will become same slash attack as sukuna. Literally copy everything he adapted. If he adapt to limitless then make his reverse spell can use limitless but limit that spell he can use into only one we don't want him too overpowered. As for shikigami he can only use their special attacks not summon shikigami itself because that is stupid.

Amazing potential. I hope you add other families like as well such as blood users from kekkai sensen and make kamo family from Japan their sub branch.

I hate he become immortal. How about make him reborn like normal avatar but make him remember he's first life little by little. Delete unimportant parts of memory. Also he has to learn earth after water not fire. He's a dark avatar so let's make it reverse so he has to learn in order of air fire earth water.

He can see hagakure right? He have gojos 6 eye.

Make this novel japanese anime or manga only. Chinese cultivation is too stupid and will ruing this story.

Please don't add Chinese novel. Just add from Japanese manga.

Doffy was already eaten string string fruit when he gone marijoa with he's father's head. How do you think 10 year old crossed half of the world?

Please nerf cheat slightly. Overpowered protagonist is so boring. Also who want to reincarnate into berserker world it's so stupid

Dmn timeline is wrong. Tezoro escaped from marijoa 13 year ago together with hancock. Let's sat he was slave 2 years this means he become slave at least 15 years ago. But this novels timeline is 10 year ago. I really hate it when fan fictions time line doesn't match or author deliberately mistake it to make main character have advantage. Why not make robin more younger and make her work for him till she become adult.m or you can make him same age as her and grow up together. Let him become boss at younger age such as 13 or 14. After that you just have to let him search characters like tezoro using family network after all he's a mafia heir

Don't nerf yamamotos power anymore. We don't care if he's become more powerful. Just leave it at 50% you can increase it after otsutsuki invasion. Just don't make him too op it will be boring also don't nerf him. He has to become powerful by fighting against all otsutsuki

I think you will write it but I still want to remind you. You have to write how shiki fought against Sengoku and Garp alone and how he escaped from impel down as a intro to this new golden lion saga.

I think energy source from that ancient robot is probably cola. Like frankly come on even in fantasy world like ONE PIECE using cola as as energy is super Hyper rule breaking technology. Frankly probably get it from pluton blueprint.

You need to add movies specially strong world together with ONE PIECE episode zero that episode Shiku escapes impel down as a movie trailer so that all ONE PIECE world watch that movie. I will be awesome

Please give straw hat pirate role in this story. Maybe make them lead war against world government. Don’t take all credit from them

Don’t you think it is too early? He’s almost immortal yet he’s having child at age of 17 come on it’s too early. Let him have kids When he’s At least 5000 year old