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Monster227mthReplied to GooseOfObesityChapter 35: The protector of Skane- Monster228mthCommented
He get access to the halls of the drowned god ?? What is this like a god domain where no one can attack him ?
None remained who could challenge Kolbyr's savage dominion of the surrounding seas. From his aqueous throne in the halls of the drowned god, he commanded tempests and leviathans alike to do his violent bidding, unleashing floods, storms, and sea monsters to complete his works of devastation and terror. All prayed his annual surfacing would deliver surcease another year, lest the whole of the coast succumb to his doom-laden coming. - Monster228mthCommented
Ok this is a bit too op
Through his blasphemous rites, Kolbyr claimed dominion over not only the tempestuous waters but all who found final rest within its murky embrace. Any plunging beneath the waves swelled his dread hosts so that none escaping his wrath could evade damnation's inescapable pull back to the slavering depths. - Monster228mthCommented
This feels a little bit to strong ?
As he wailed, every sea creature answered - schools of skate and shark swarmed in a dance as dark as the depths. Krakens dozens strong abandoned their lairs to bow giant tentacles before the child. Even leviathans untouched by the memory of man surfaced to pay tribute, recognizing their lord reborn. - Monster228mthCommentedCh 18 Emissaries of the Divine
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Nope they had a very delcite relationship
While to outsiders this may seem a setback, Aereys knew it merely advanced his timetable. With luck, his father would bow to pressure and seal Faith's fate sooner than expected. Aereys was content to enact the next stage of his scheme abroad before returning to a weakened realm. - Monster228mthReplied to Infinite_Shadow_57
????????????? DUDE WHAT??????? The faith of the seven is the domaint religion on all of westros for thousands of years except for the north were they keep the old gods it’s so domaint that is why no taragaryan king ever messed with them or he will be denounced and happen just like Maegor reign all rebellions and poorfellows and rebellions that’s why argon kept delcite balance with he faith
While to outsiders this may seem a setback, Aereys knew it merely advanced his timetable. With luck, his father would bow to pressure and seal Faith's fate sooner than expected. Aereys was content to enact the next stage of his scheme abroad before returning to a weakened realm. - Monster228mthReplied to UthredofBebbanburg
Hello I think you confused this corlys varyon with the corlys from the dance of dragons time also know as sea snake they are not the same this corlys is the first lord commander of the kingsguard while his older brother Aethan valaryon became head of house valaryon Lords of the house valaryon Aethan valaryon>Daemon valaryon>corlys valaryon(sea snake)
As tensions rose between the queen and king, the royal family relied more than ever on the protection of Aegon's elite Kingsguard. Ser Corlys Velaryon, a renowned seafarer and warrior, admirably led the guard as its first Lord Commander. - Monster228mthCommented"Your story has more holes than a castrated goat, pale stranger. But let our blood prove us both to the Great Stallion, as is our way. So be it - may the stronger khalasar triumph on this day."
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Three years on your way
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- Monster228mthCommented"Blood of my blood, allow me to dispatch this outsider for you," demanded Qorro, one of Khal Jommo's fiercest bloodriders.
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Really? Bullying old people
Khal Jommo had ruled his khalasar for nearly four decades, an unprecedentedly long reign for a leader of the Dothraki. Though age had silvered his once coal-black hair and put wrinkles around his keen dark eyes, his muscled frame remained as dense and powerful as ever. - Monster228mthReplied to DFAR
LOL
"The King and his three young sons, along with his bastard half-brother Orys Baratheon and the Kingsguard, were on a hunt when suddenly, ''as if appearing from thin air'' if the words of the king's guard are to be believed, a wild boar half the size of a horse' charged towards Prince Aerys, according to the Kingsguard's reports. Prince Maegor, ever protective of his twin, shielded Aerys with his body while the brave Aerys drew his dagger to face the beast. As Prince Aenys cried and fled in fear, it seemed the dragon twins' fate was sealed. But thanks be to the Seven, Orys Baratheon's swift strike with his blade cleaved the boar in two, saving the lives of Aerys and Maegor on that day."-Maester Gawen- - Monster228mthCommentedCh 11 Aerys The Dragon Knight
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Let daddy aegon pay for it
"30 gold dragons to all the garrison in Dragonstone and 5 for every servant and maid," said Prince Aerys as he exited Dragonstone and made his way to Dragonmount earning another round of cheers. - Monster228mthCommented
Another faceles men? Author you been hiding something from us ??
(("I know you and if you came to me I would have beheaded you thinking you were another faceless man")) - Monster228mthCommentedAereys strode through the halls of Dragonstone with renewed purpose. Ten years under his father's watch had been insufferable, with so much power just out of reach. Now, exile provided an opportunity - five years of freedom to achieve what he'd long planned.