I like that you give prominence to this character, it makes me feel identified

I don't know why, but I imagined that I absorbed the soul of a transmigrator, keeping his personality.

This MC can give this story a breath of fresh air. I say this because he seems like a typical MC, reincarnating in a world with a typical skill and attitude. If he matures or has a chance to develop more, he can be a great character. Even a main antagonist, or a chance to turn Edward darker Does it sound strange that you have so many expectations for such a simple character?

If you develop Martina's character better, you would have a very powerful duo. I do not deny that the perspective excites me

In my opinion, if the character development continues like this, then basically he will have the minister to do whatever he wants, which I think is too much. But since you've made Voldemort more powerful I don't worry too much about it, although it would have been much more interesting for advanced Britain to try to deal with that Dark Lord without the MC's help. Will there be another villain after Voldemort? And, just as a message, "Time-turners are a powerful thing." If I sound rude I apologize, but the translator chooses the words, not me

I think despite what a lot of people want, he shouldn't recover so quickly, because if he does, it will be easier for him to be OP and this will become a typical reincarnation story. If he recovers quickly I'd suggest giving more OP back to the reincarnator or directly to Voldemort. It's my opinion, I really like this story and that's why I'm writing this, because I don't want it to be spoiled and become a cliché.

I hope that this story does not end, since it is one of the few that has an OC as the main character, while the reincarnator becomes secondary, one question, will it have a multiverse theme? For example, traveling to another world where there is another reincarnation, because if you travel alone to worlds without reincarnations, the characters quickly become OP, it happens in all fanfictions.

Is this fanfic going to have a multiverse theme?

It would be great if a reincarnation appears in the world of Naruto, since it is flooded with fanfics of this type

Excelente

I admit that I expect a fight against another reincarnator, since until now we only know about other disciples, but there was never any interaction between the reincarnators

maybe this guy will become a second Maito Guy

I think that exploring magic from other continents would be essential, such as South America, and a trip back in time to the Inca Era would be very informative, as well as providing an explanation of how Machu Picchu was created.

I feel like it's strange that he alone is the only one who traveled to other worlds and strived to be the best, just like Edward It would have been epic to see an evil and ruthless MC, that is, a dark lord, from the same world (HP) who has achieved many things with magic and defeated Edward in a duel, with which he realizes that he is not the the only one who has made an effort, also that it could be used in a way that shows us a human side of Merlin, showing that he also makes mistakes, or taking advantage of the word "most" not all

It would be great if he met another reincarnator who may be better than him, so that he understands that he is not the only one to reincarnate and the worlds can have variations

Esto es excelente, un capítulo hermoso, no tengo palabras para describir mi emoción

Oohh, I find a way to erase his memories and make a plan that will be executed subconsciously to be better with the public and no longer worry about being the villain, I hope that in the next chapters it will be explained when and how he did this genius of plan (GOOGLE TRANSLATE)

I think the chapter was good, I don't remember if I mentioned it in the previous chapter, but it saddens me that you don't explore the time travel that was not like the traditional ones, well, excellent chapter.

Is there a reason why the Dragon is a bit unpleasant to Nymphadora? I wonder that, if magic preserves your attitudes in a similar way to the soul, traits like emotions or thoughts, the dragon is unpleasant because there may be some bad intention on the part of Tonks, of course this is just a theory, but it would be interesting to make the MC less trusting and more cautious, otherwise this is a good chapter

I wonder who would win in a fight, this MC, Nailúo, or the MC of The Godlike Hokage called Naito?