Man if you don't have any creative thoughts in your brain, at least have some decency to not steal someone else work. Pathetic. You should be ashamed. Plagiarism from every sentence.

Interesting character and great plot .What else do you need?

Well, I am surprised Han decided to leave village now. After all he knows the consequences for that, especially in the time of war .

Lyra do it girl! Tell him the truth

I doubt this is the end of Walter involvement.

Just read it. Trust it is something magnificent

Great work. I hope you have a nice break

I think we all know how they catch them. Ori will take that traitor piece by piece when he find him.

Nice, only his parents left to deal with.

Thank you and can't wait for more

Well, definitely interesting. I hope to see more in future

Vermithor. Brings status and one of the biggest dragon in dance. Also you will take it from black side, while Cannibal will continue to be wild.

Let's kill some blacks

+1

One of the best story I read on this site so far

Well now is the hardest part. I hope you manage to keep the original writer style of writing. So far you did great.

yea, but Saske was in two meters nearby Naruto. Do you want to say Obito is at the same distance?

I don't think it's possible for Obito to be inside mizukage head at the moment. Unless it is some kind of Obito part, like Orochimaru mind in cursed sails. I think you need to work on that.