I feel you, most times it is not about handsome or ugly, but clean and unclean

this name in spanish and with this phrasing is too much...

No, it will change eventually. It's just that our MC hasn't compleatly accepted her new body yet. She is coming to terms thought in the lastest chapters.

I'm lost for words. the narration in beautiful, almost poetic. It is a story that has many time jumps and you wouldn't know what will happen next, so those mini surprise changes in scenarios are interesting and very eye-openeing. Just like being blow-minded. All in all a great read.

What happened with Mathew? Is David the real protagonist?

What a beautiful way to open the story, throught confusing, it was still a nice exposition. I felt a bit lost tho, since the pov keep changing and wasn't sure if it was Julia, Mat, or just the narrator. I was like usser mcross says with their gif.

I literally heard a mic drop here.

what kind of sorcery if this??? just-fire, how??!!

He is, hahahaha.

Ok, so shameless author's review. This is a slow-burn love story, mostly because I want to take my time doing some world-building and developing key characters. There will be many arcs like magic aprendice, learning about the church ideals, magic academy drama, and I shouldn't say more to avoid spoiler hahaha. Just a heads up that there will be a lot of mistery and some gore involved in later chapters. Updates won't be too frecuent now since I'm not a native english speaker, nor do I have the time to revise chapters these days (where do I get an editor? this author needs help ah _(:3 」∠)_ ) Enjoy the story ❤

I just want to say, don't get your hopes too high with this one, he acts too much like a creep to be the ML, I almost prefer the absent father over him.

Aww, maybe it is QwQ

Thank you! And you will need to wait to see uwu

He is... another person hahaha. Actually, I want to ask, you really thought it was the original Eliel?

Good question. I will need to explain this eventually but short version: every boy in the kingdom should start learning at age twelve, it is the parent's decision to apoint them a tutor before that or not. Most noble families do it when they are ten.

She was musing it from a canon perspective. Like if it would be better to follow what the original did or not, but by now the story has deviated too far from the original that it doesn't matter anymore.

gotta fix that too 🤣

ah, I wanna explain so bad, but... 🤐🤐🤐

but with more torture, right? 🤔

thanks, gotta fix that 😂