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  • becool
    becool2yr
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    I love to read your long chapters...😍 please, update twice in a day.

    Ch 25 Ch. 24. Stuck
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  • becool
    becool2yr
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    my savage girl!😂😍

    "Fuck the society, man! I don't like the rules of society. I don't get one thing if we are free, why do they want to make a cage for us like what should we do and what we shouldn't! I want to be free, free from everything."
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  • becool
    becool2yr
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    So romantic!!!😍😍😍 I love his lines❤️

    "I don't believe in fairytales. I don't know if they exist or not," she mumbled and my heart yelled that don't worry, baby! I'll make you believe in the fairytale, we'll be the evidence of its existence.
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  • becool
    becool2yr
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    Of course, there should be more handouts like this.😍

    Never mess with a girl when your buddy has hurt her friend. And she gave me a hope that there will be the next time, she'll hang out with me for the next time, too.
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  • becool
    becool2yr
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    Girls are like this... one moment yes, other second no! It's always complicated with girls😂😂😂

    "Oops! No! We can grab some water or juices from that store," she pointed her index finger towards a supermarket store, "can't you just control your thrust for a while? I don't want Fee to be there alone, she came just to give me company." She pleaded with her puppy eyes.
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  • becool
    becool2yr
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    the love place, cute apartment of them😍

    "What happened? This is not the park, why did you stop the bike midway? Please, don't tell me that you took the wrong route or you have forgotten the directions!" Lia started building an exclusive apartment of her questions for me.
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  • becool
    becool2yr
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    keep adding some funny things like this😂👍✔️

    Do I want her to hold me...um, am I a lollipop?
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  • becool
    becool2yr
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    I loved this line🤣

    Do I want her to hold me...um, am I a lollipop?
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  • becool
    becool2yr
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    waiting for the next update😍👍

    Ch 23 Ch. 22. First Call
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  • becool
    becool2yr
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    loving your fast updates! thank you for updating😍

    Give your opinions in the comments, lovelies!
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  • becool
    becool2yr
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    Good start!👍

    Ch 2 Ch.1. The darkness
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  • becool
    becool2yr
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    I loved this chapter😍 I'm the fan of Fee and Lisa's friendship. I want this friendship forever.❤️

    Ch 19 Ch. 18. I'm confused
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  • becool
    becool2yr
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    I'll support you with all my heart & reviews & votes, your story is so fascinating, I just can't wait to read more and more, please, update twice in a day. 😍 Loved your writing style how you describe ebeything.

    Ch 12 Ch. 11. Friendship
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  • becool
    becool2yr
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    I loved how Fee and Lia handled the situation.😅💯

    Ch 11 Ch. 10. Time to celebrate
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  • becool
    becool2yr
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    I'm loving your writing style as you are in no hurry to make the characters fall in love, when I read the chapters I felt that everything is happening in real and naturally. Great work, author! your book seems realistic even it's a fictional 💯😅 I'm waiting to read how they fall in love and how their story ends. very interesting story, Jasmine❤️ Loved it

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  • becool
    becool2yr
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    Lia and her mom make a good pair as a mother and a daughter, I love to read their tantrums 😅❤️

    Ch 11 Ch. 10. Time to celebrate
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  • becool
    becool2yr
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    liking the starting, looking forward to read the book.[img=recommend]

    Ch 12 The Truth
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    My Youth Began With Him
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  • becool
    becool2yr
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    Kudos to author for great character development 👍 waiting to see where the great start leads

    Ch 10 Ch. 9. Apology
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  • becool
    becool3yr
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    I'm liking your writing style, I can already imagine Emma Watson as Lia Watson😄. [img=recommend]

    It's me your author, thank you for reading my book. It's just starting of the novel, I wanted to give enough time to the character development so that all of you could have the perfect images in your mind of all the characters, it's a fiction book, and the characters are more important than plots(according to me). I needed to make you guys comprehend the characters, in the next chapter, you'll meet the protagonist with whom you are gonna fall in love. I'm working on both character development and plot development. So, be patient with me, and support me with your votes, comments, and love.
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  • becool
    becool3yr
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    I'm enjoying your humor, good job author[img=recommend]😊👍

    Ch 3 Ch.2. Feeling sorry for you
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