I loved the book honestly I wish you would continue the book it had a lot of good pros there is a couple things you could work on but over all good I think if you read books and like spread out a bit and came back it would be good

Really good book plz continue ppplllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Can you post more I was enjoying this

It was a 5 all day before and then this last chapter came out and its so bad the graphic dropped to a zero for real what happened did like the editor quit

I for one enjoyed it I think you should continue making the book plz I hate how all these people are hating on the book when they probably only got to the first chapter

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It’ really good it could use some touch ups on some little thing like some time you will call him a girl or her a guy but that simple. I don’ t know what the guys above are taking. About its good

Bru im so frinking pissed make more chapters i dont Know who sent that last Review But Shut off this Is a great book and you so need to continue It im going To Vote one power stone to you everyday So you most continue plz.

Its Sounds sOooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good i love books with this kids thing happening Getting system and that Stuff

This Is a great Book and nooooooiooiiiiiiiooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo its over i have been readIngng this sense it came out aNd i cried when it was over plz make another one plz