I'm here from your previous fanfic which you decided to scrap because of some reason. I've read this remake and I've like this one better but I'll give a serious review unlike last time.Writing quality is very good and there's no grammatical mistakes whatsoever and even if there were, I'm sure that it's atleast readable.The story development is goof and I see no changes from the last book but I really hope you write for your own sake instead of your readers since that's the most enjoyable way to do it.Character design seems to be the one that changed the most compared to the last fic but this ones way better. updating stability seems good until now but I hope everything is going well at your job. world background... it was already done by JKR so there's no point talking about it. oh wait, it'll be better to write down the fact that this is an AU since there are a few key differences compared to the original if you are following your other fanfic's setting.As for the FL, assuming that you are going to make your own decision since you asked about the personalities, I'll write down what I think.Luna seems to be the best choice if you want an innocent and wholesome atmosphere since she's just weird but in a good way.Daphne will be a great choice if there's going to be some politics and drama. she's actually a great choice for most of the things since there isn't much written about her.Fleur.... a few months of relationship and then it'll go long distance. Better for a fling instead of a proper relationship.Hermione... well, keeping my prejudices aside, she will be a decent girlfriend but she will probably not listen to Alex and get into the thick of things. She'll be a great friend but she's just overused.I guess that'll be it. I put a lot of effort into this review so please don't quit. I love this book.

Bro I totally agree with you. there's also a fact that Hufflepuff is the ONLY house that has a defensive mechanism that prevents people from entering their common room. Also, Hufflepuff is very underrated so it makes sense that people kinda hate on it. (I could go on and on but I'm sure I'll bore people. in short, Hufflepuff is great and shouldn't very underestimated.)

No its about 10 chapters. I stopped at ch 18 and waited to see if you will drop it or not but looks like my wishes were answered. Overall, the Chinese ark felt too rushed but the last few chapters were goooood. Although I'd prefer more gore but I really hope that I get some gore and ruthlessness in the third year atleast. Please dont take this seriously and write what you think is the best.

bro see his profile. acting all knowledgeable when there's nothing but a peanut sized brain inside your skull.

I have read until 16 chaps now and I'll write what i think about this fic. This book feels unique and also similar to the other fanfics here but it is pretty good in my opinions. Actually, one of the best. The author mostly uses dialogues and internal monologues to give us an idea of what's happening but it's done pretty well. My favourite part about this is that the main char doesn't follow the trio around like an idiot. Currently he has one friend and idk if Hannah and Susan count as he barely talks to them. Alex seems pretty shrewd and crafty. maybe ruthless to since the synopsis says that there will be gore and stuff but it's not yet seen until chap 16. In my opinion, everyone should give it a read.

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I guess that it's "first ever murder". New author so u have my support. Keep writing, human.

a clear plot hole

I have a feeling .... a really strong feeling that this 'god' is somehow connected to our mc

respects my bro . I completely understand what u mean

snakes don't have "necks"

people say the novel is interesting but .... I don't see what Is so interesting about it. there is no creativity at all and the author makes the mc comment about the obviousness . This is just underwhelming . the mc is op apparently and he is strong to the point that it's boring af . sorry but this is what I actually felt when I read this . no offense to anyone . just putting out there .....

first negative comment I agree with .... it really did feel forced.

and u should have already known that the author is following the original plot line. year wise.

u say so personality ..... then u probably don't even know how a human being thinks. ivy and Daphne seemed soo much more than the so called "one-dimensional" characters . if u don't understand how a human thinks, don't bother talking about it. just because the author didn't carter to ur expectations , u go and talk shit . Please be a decent human being. Every single character in this novel have a depth to them so I don't see any meaning in ur review .

I like this wormtail more than the original.

was she added ?

u mean 10 mins later ?

is it an amalgamation of sin-quinn ....it's either that or it's time magic related