This story of yours showed me the greatness of reading books. I cannot express how thrilling it was to wait for each new chapter. Now with this closure, I believe you can do your best to make Necromancer even greater than William's story.

Much appreciated

thought the author forgot about her

i guess but seems vague

more like Original Magic-BROLY TRANSFORMATION

sounds like orochimaru from naruto

typical yandere

Ciara, the sadistic girl , with Stephen being the boy who always tries to be useful

"Being strong really is a curse" Ah, the troubles of the strong!

some parental teaching is on the way

indeed unexpected i wonder what will happen to his married life

Serah scine she does not need any tools for transcendental magic Meaning if she did the magic would be greater

This going to be an unpredictable battle. And that excites me So far everything seems fine, but a little to easy wouldn't you say. We need some plat twists, especially unpredictable ones

somewhere in the future- A three way battle between maria, anna and freya

pace is quicker in this chapter At least that's how i feel

First Happy Birthday day, have great time! Now i know why so many chapters were released Thank you very much Really enjoyed this release

Roots stronger than metal, refined by mana over the years

ELVEN sounds better

Finally the "new world" BRING those elven beauties and their matriarchal society

seeing that jared has grown a lot in terms of power, too quickly rather, however it seems he needs a little bit more development in his character as a person who vowed to be different from his past self To be precise, there needs to be more support from the cast around him, even if it is little, to show Jared is evolved from a loner In essence, everyone in his inner circle , except Neron, requires power up to be helpful in the story or be involved more explicitly- one or more chapter dedicated to characters like Anna's development, Ed's journey or even his grandfather's thoughts on the upcoming war. Chapters focusing on other characters would make the world feel alive, a prime choice might be the thoughts of Jared's father. Currently everything is from Jared's perspective , all we need is different perspectives on the world itself