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You should fix the beginning of this sentence i believe you mixed the brothers names. love the direction so far. you have s great talent can't wait to finish more chapters .
I normally don't write reviews but love the background of this. It has a pure vibe and open storyline that could lead the charecters anywhere. it also paints a vivid picture of the events though I wish charecter style and looks where a little more in depth.