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SolwayAtom2mthCommentedgreat chapter. Some cool ideas you could include in-between now and the start of canon twilight. Would be great for you to have da Vinci make some artwork with Adam as its focus. Would love to see Adam visit the shapeshifters. Would also love to see Adam become one of the founding fathers and be painted with the rest of them in the declaration of independence painting and/or the signing of the constitution painting as well. (adding to the whole bible Adam walking the earth story for people to find). Maybe have a few chapters where a historian is finding these different findings of Adam existing. (religious historian). Maybe show the Vatican's view or response to finding out about Adam being real or maybe incorporate the Val hellsing movie with the Vatican interacting with Adam.
I'm expecting to do about three or possibly four more chapters before the main story starts.- SolwayAtom2mthCommented
great chapter. Some cool ideas you could include in-between now and the start of canon twilight. Would be great for you to have da Vinci make some artwork with Adam as its focus. Would love to see Adam visit the shapeshifters. Would also love to see Adam become one of the founding fathers and be painted with the rest of them in the declaration of independence painting and/or the signing of the constitution painting as well. (adding to the whole bible Adam walking the earth story for people to find). Maybe have a few chapters where a historian is finding these different findings of Adam existing. (religious historian). Maybe show the Vatican's view or response to finding out about Adam being real or maybe incorporate the Val hellsing movie with the Vatican interacting with Adam.
Ch 71 Moving forward & new guy - SolwayAtom2mthCommented
From the looks of it, from the previous chapters where Homelander ordered martin to harvest both Maeve's and Himiko's eggs, they must have left one inseminated egg inside for both to get pregnant, whilst keeping the others for either artificial insemination into other women/powered-women or cryogenically stored them for later.
Ch 49 Legacy - SolwayAtom4mthCommented
is this a real fanfiction or just a made up one. if its real can you please post the name of it, thanks.
I nod and figure this world has a good chance of growing back to where it was given how this was a fan fiction I read. And I wasn't a fan of the premise but it had a good development in the end once you rrad past chapter 10. - SolwayAtom1yrCommented
anyone able to tell me the dragons names and who and where they come from and who the where originally supposed to be like drogon etc?
A mighty roar can be heard from the sky before a torrent of fire suddenly burns any horse that passes an invisible line. This is Alduin, and he has been given a task by his father to burn anyone who dares to pass the line his father drew before. Alduin is ecstatic when his father gives him a task. He wants to make his father proud, after all. However, what makes him even more excited is his job, burning something. - SolwayAtom1yrCommented
shuri and n'jadaka obviously
(Pick your visions. You guys get Ororo and 2 of the other 4) - SolwayAtom1yrCommented
Author-san, can you please fix the end of chapter 38? There is a large gap in information and time between the end of chapter 38 and the start of chapter 39.
This book has been deleted. - SolwayAtom1yrCommented
Author-san, can you please fix the end of chapter 38? There is a large gap in information and time between the end of chapter 38 and the start of chapter 39.
This book has been deleted. - SolwayAtom1yrCommented
Author-san, can you please fix the end of chapter 38? There is a large gap in information and time between the end of chapter 38 and the start of chapter 39.
This book has been deleted. - SolwayAtom1yrCommented
Author-san, can you please fix the end of chapter 38? There is a large gap in information and time between the end of chapter 38 and the start of chapter 39.
This book has been deleted. - SolwayAtom1yrCommented
you forgot the part of the accords about what to do with the countries that haven't signed the accords yet?
Tony smiled. "If these changes can be implemented into the final version of the Accords, you will have a deal with the Avengers to work under the Accords and with the United Nations." He and Natasha rose from their chairs. "Thank you for your time to listen to our requests and consider them all." - SolwayAtom1yrCommented
hey why did the story just change?
I rise off the ground and fly towards him, powering forwards to avoid drawing this nonsense out any longer. He's gone for his plasma crossbow but it's a simple matter to shoot it before he can fire. He hurls it aside before the fuel cell vents and ignites in a brilliant flare of red. He keeps it together though, dropping into a fighting crouch and moving towards me again. I just tanked exploding javelins, idiot, you're just going to bruise your fists. He throws a smoke canister, then sprints to close the distance faster than someone watching him before would have been expecting. Might work on someone without OrangeVision, but I can still see him perfectly well. - SolwayAtom1yrCommented
why did it suddenly change story half way thorugh. one moment Oh El is talking about the Teenage mutant ninja turtels and then the next paragraph is all of a sudden back to when he was fighting sports master but instead he goes all evil mode and assimilates him. did you forget the story whilst writing it?
Ch 20 22nd July 20:59 GMT -5 - SolwayAtom1yrCommented
prank 3. having many coincidents happening with the number 42. for instance, 42 younglings asking for where the toilet is, 42 missing socks/clothes of the council members combined, have palpatine noticing things in batches of 42, like 42 complaints against him, 42 airhorns going of near him, 42 "do it"s, 42 clones named ct-4242, have shennighans with the clone battlieon the 42nd, 42 times he trips on his robe.
Will try for another chapter Next Weekend. But can only do so if I can think up more ways to prank and mess with the Jedi and Sidious. All suggestions are welcomed. - SolwayAtom1yrCommented
prank 2. have the jedi and sith constantly end up getting wet and needing towels.
Will try for another chapter Next Weekend. But can only do so if I can think up more ways to prank and mess with the Jedi and Sidious. All suggestions are welcomed. - SolwayAtom1yrCommented
prank 1. have all the jedi and sith end up at anakin and padmae's wedding trying to stop it but have them be accidentally dropped in water and then have it rain on them before becoming unnaturally sunny for the wedding. have some sassy anakin/obi wan sass talk about how they should have just brought towels like the force told them too.
Will try for another chapter Next Weekend. But can only do so if I can think up more ways to prank and mess with the Jedi and Sidious. All suggestions are welcomed.