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Matti_Torio1yrCommentedAuthor? what was lacking in all these chapters is the guy's feelings...you failed to give him his inner thoughts and feelings...how he felt in every thing .. wronged or betrayed, even appreciative in times .... all you did is portrayed him as a cold, disgusted aloof human being...
Ch 40 She’s Unworthy (2)- Matti_Torio1yrCommented
she is the lifeline? Never would have thought there is such kind of culture... debt payment? lifeline?
Xu Weilai had no idea how she could explain the relationship between her and Gu Yu to her mother. Besides, even if she did, it was unlikely that her mother would believe her. Her mother was currently like a woman drowning in the deep waters. She would cling on tightly to any lifeline that presented itself. And right now, Gu Yu was that lifeline! - Matti_Torio2yrCommented
can't you make the female lead alottle aggressive, strong and wilfull.. it is so sad to have a lead auch as timid, shy. unable to fight back, no will of her own, so afraid of her own self... are there really still women like her nowadays?
The board was made of extremely durable, solid metal, and she could feel the sharp pain in her back when she slammed into it. She almost cried out. - Matti_Torio2yrCommented
oh gosh how could you endure such pain... his behaviour is so disgusting!
Qin Zhi'ai closed her eyes and drew a few cold breaths. She leaned against the billboard with her stiff body for quite some time before the pain finally eased. - Matti_Torio2yrCommentedCh 2 002 Dead pigs aren't afraid of boiling water
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who would have cared really!
The woman seemed unbothered; one could even describe her with the phrase 'dead pigs aren't afraid of boiling water.' - Matti_Torio2yrCommentedCh 1 001 Forcefully Hacked
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good advice to self.... move on. .. there are "more fishes in the lake. "
She questioned herself in the mirror, the one that scared herself, lips pursed. Perhaps she should try to make some changes. Perhaps she wouldn't be so miserable that way, drowning in sorrow. - Matti_Torio2yrCommented
whoa... .intriguing... what kind of arrangement is this? what is to become of the girl?
This book has been deleted. - Matti_Torio2yrCommented
intelligent question... you can't just accept something too good to be true.... okay, let's see.
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something too weird to believe. .. ut interesting.
This book has been deleted. - Matti_Torio2yrCommentedCh 2 2. Birthday Party
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the way they were. both described definitely showed they were.goddesses.
There's no doubt that this woman was his daughter. Phoenix De Amore, the stunning woman he was looking at, was a perfect replica of his mother when she was still in her youth. The obvious truth could be seen from her face, she was no doubt a Crawford. - Matti_Torio2yrCommentedCh 6 You are behaving like a pervert.
- Matti_Torio2yrCommentedCh 4 A little sleep, all pain gone