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Chams_Farnane

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  • Chams_Farnane
    Chams_Farnane3yr
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    Love the details

    "The usual?" I ask, already knowing the answer. He doesn't reply and simply nods at me. He's distanced, deep in thought. I step out of his car and leave him alone with his thoughts. As I enter the shop, the bell above the door rings, announcing my arrival. I glance around at the wooden benches lining both sides, it's completely empty.
    The Dark Side
    Teen · Sakz
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  • Chams_Farnane
    Chams_Farnane3yr
    Commented

    U finally used quickly instead of slowly

    The zombie slowly moved inside a hallway to the end, out of Mark's vision. Slowly removing his hand, he exhaled in relief and used his sleeve to wipe the sweat off his face. Not willing to stay there anymore, Mark quickly opened the refrigerator and stored 10 water bottles inside the bag.
    THE END OF LIFE
    Horror · Cruchymonster
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  • Chams_Farnane
    Chams_Farnane3yr
    Commented

    No no nooooooooo aaaaaaa shE just spOiLed the whole story i don’t wanna read it anymore ommg

    He craned his neck and looked back, he saw the creature was screaming (that sound will remain haunting him even if he survived and get out of there) and unlucky for him, she was a lot closer than he taught she was.
    Short Horror Stories
    Horror · not_sou_serious
    detail
  • Chams_Farnane
    Chams_Farnane3yr
    Commented

    Thought

    Weird... Why is she not saying anything??! Can she even speak or is she in some kind of trauma? He taught..
    Short Horror Stories
    Horror · not_sou_serious
    detail
  • Chams_Farnane
    Chams_Farnane3yr
    Replied to Chams_Farnane

    OtherWise the rest is good

    Ch 1 One Night.
    Short Horror Stories
    Horror · not_sou_serious
    detail
  • Chams_Farnane
    Chams_Farnane3yr
    Commented

    I don’t like the Fact that the writer mentions that the character “will never forget what happened after” it decreases the value of the book. (Personal opinion)

    Ch 1 One Night.
    Short Horror Stories
    Horror · not_sou_serious
    detail