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when he becomes the cosmic emperor you can merge his multiple personalities (zed, kiba, extermination) or make Kiba dominant forever. I find it inconvenient that you left Zed with the personality of a Shounem protagonist. it makes it look like they are 2 different people when he becomes kiba.
not to mention that the arc of the academy, the MC started to stop being the main focus for the author to make several subplots of other reincarnated people and people with systems. not that these people are going to make any threat to the MC it's just something to hinder the development of the mc itself.
It starts out good but after a while it loses its charm. I'm on c200 and MC solves everything with 2 slaps. Mc's mother is the strongest being in the world and has no sense of danger in history. the MC's personality isn't particularly nice, there's no feeling of the MC getting stronger because his lineage is already the best in this world since the beginning and his enemies don't give a challenge. the good thing about mc overpower is them humiliating people who are arrogant but so far in history no one has really interacted directly with the MC and most of his enemies are afraid of him at the flee. Add that to being almost impossible to die in this world when everyone has more than 10 lives and it's hard to keep going for very long.
Don't get it wrong, I like it but in moderation. When I wrote this, it was in the chapter that the MC made women fall in love with him with a peck and they were already crazy, since he hadn't even cultivated yet. I don't like this type of relationship building, but as I read it, it got better over time.
Evelyn? and hopefully this MC doesn't inseminate all of Claus's daughters if that Silvya Quin is really his daughter and the protective duke is Claus. creating a new MC to inseminate the family of the other novel's protagonist would not be pleasant.
Can't you make a sister less jealous? instead of cool it looks hateful. She is the character I hate the most so far. She is jealous even of a 12 year old. Characters like that are good in stories without Harems. Anyone who reads a harem already has a different mindset for girls. Unless that girl is too special in power or status to be worth all this jealousy.
if you read fourth prince you will see that mana is irrelevant on the way to becoming stronger. the MC only needs to become proficient in one law and pave his own path to cultivation. can use other sources of power that do not depend on mana.
konrad ate the reincarnation of the sister of the past life, the cousin, the mother of the current life and the one of the past life, ate the DAUGHTER, created a universal law that rewards his most meritorious subjects, forcing them to surrender their wives , sisters and daughters. there is an organization created by the son with men who wear green hats proudly with stars depending on the level of cuckold they are and brag about having their wives in the bed of korand, with the vice president of the organization traveling the various universes to look for a wife and cultivate Romance with her for 3 years for wedding day on honeymoon offer her to konrad willingly while crying
The golden rod is an ability of his penis that subdues the women he fucks. He used his flirting skills to pick up women. We see this in the first woman he "fools" which is jasmine. With one look he knows what kind of way he should approach her to conquer her in the shortest possible time. the only women Konrad used the perfume to bed were his enemies.
we started reading this story for the 18+ scenes but why are the scenes so small? and better development would be nice. it's a women's only school and it should be for virgin girls but the first two that MC took were so easy that even with the system it was strange. continuing reading. it seems that free and undeveloped sex is the norm in this work. all the girls at least in the chapters i read look like they already had 50 men in their lives. For those who are used to the Japanese style of writing, it is a little different. not to mention that since they all seem to have the same personality and call the MC master, you can't differentiate anything. all forgettable.
Are all the older women in this novel pedophiles? in fourth prince I didn't think it was strange because the MC was an immortal of thousands of years and he was the one who seduced women. But in this novel it's the women who seduce the MC and even do it in public.