Bet, Rui is the son 😂

The first 100 or so chapters at very nice. But after that the author goes from slow slice of love to slowmotion. The author fills chapters with unnecessary long explanations for manga, anime, music context. I mean one paragraph is enough for this story but no it’s entire chapters wasted for things I could search online if interested. It’s really sad. Furthermore during the song creation big parts of the songs are just copied in the chapters… just useless space. Also the characters are really nice and deep but most of the conversations are just too friendly and also repetitive. I mean how often do you say thank you to your friends it’s just abnormal. To summarise after 100 chapters the novel is increasingly tiring. And reeks like the author just wants to make more money for usless chapters. I drop this now at chapter 267, hopefully the author goes back to before.

What happend to December?? I needed to read annoyingly long cold winter storm descriptions and now snap it’s so warm they can tan and go outside in a bikini???????

??? What happend with December???

Author i liked your slow pace until now, because although nothing plot wise happend but the relationships were shown or the characters better explained but the last two chapters are utter waste. I mean one complete chapter the ambient description and the hole time stuck cooking and now just story repeat I mean just reading until now you got it…. pls improve your pace again a bit because like this I drop this

Tanks for the chapter writing. I have to say that your writing style is improving and getting more sophisticated by the day. Some conversations maybe have too much details but the setting and event description is pretty nice. Also could you cut the asset section and only list parts or all of it if needed further on. The company is currently at a stage where the information about their assets is not that essential for every chapter.

Nice, best sentence was at the end of one chapter where mc is thinking about something with a martini lol. That was pretty funny because hes 15 but behaving like James Bond, pls leave this can also be supported with other perspective to be funny. Further could the age later be used by opponents later. For example to ralley consumers against the company or question qualifications as mercenaries and such. During the presidential meeting with the military guy Douglas there was something like that but could be used more often because its also pretty plausible that people dont accept the young age. Thangs for accepting the critique by the way

I like the story and it’s development pretty much and hope for more chapters As Comment to the yacht scene/ ark: I acknowledge that the mc is regressed and his soul or whatever is 23 but I mean he causally drinks and smokes and nobody is commenting anything. I am not against him drinking or such but his body is just 15… and nobody on the yacht says anything to his weed smoking and drinking for the first time??? Also the friends drinking would have been a funny chapter because they are new to it but the author skipped it like they are drinking since birth lol. Isn’t that pretty implausible? Maybe for future chapters the author should think about the age more and how other people interact with a boy his age in a more plausible way on some topics