It's not finished so I'll be editing it once it's done.

I feel like the MC so much. I feel like I'm in the book and all I can think about is how to defeat the goblin. Great job and I am planning to read more.

Oh my god, I love the way you created the kingdoms and how they act towards each other. I'm in love with your protagonist and how she's so "Rebellious" I'm reading more.

I'm confused about that also...

I love my stories with smut and this collection of stories really amaze me. You have talent and I'm surprised that you don't have more attention on it. It's fabulous! I shall read more.

I like your way of us seeing the chapter on both sides plus as a way to see together as one...if that makes sense? :) It's a great chapter! I shall read more and your book is in my library so I hope you keep updates!

The book has great potential and I feel like there's passion that the writer put in both characters in the story, I love McKenna and Jason maybe stuck up in chapter one, but he definitely gives a chance at something more than just words and general actions like he did with chapter one so I will be sticking around until the end.

Jason may sound stuck up and be rude to McKenna, but I feel that he might show something more to her in the future chapters, I shall read more.

The protagonist is amazing, it's like "Wizard of Oz" because they're in a world that is the start of a new life that they're in. The synopsis is amazing it got me hooked. I recommend this to everyone on here!

It's something that I was just excited about! I'm planning on reading more. =D

I had wrote a flash fiction story with similar details to it. Great job.

I loved the details to *** and how her mistress was so commanding to her *** slave!