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bcgamer162yrCommentedOut played son
"Shit." He said before I threw him away against the side of the arena.- bcgamer162yrPosted
In my opinion this novel is pretty good, because its relatively realistic and the world building creates interesting scenes and makes you wonder more about the world Suzie adventures through. Although there are various grammatical issues probably due to translation, the main nitpick I have with this novel is how stupid the characters can be. I've read about 35 chapters and there is still no reason to like Hadley (No redeeming qualities on why she's Peyton's first love besides her being "happy"), and some of Suzie's actions are illogical and sometimes out of character. However, as I said before this novel besides those nitpicks is pretty interesting and I will continue reading and hoping for more chapters.
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*Sigh*
why?.. why do we need to do missions first?, i want to fine deicide immediately!. - bcgamer162yrCommented
Naive
"Did i said something wrong to make them feel angry towards us?" i stared at lilith and smiled softly. - bcgamer162yrCommented
Natural lady killer. First the cashier now the daughter
"Don't flirt with daughter!" - bcgamer162yrCommented
... Jealousy (I really don't like her still, maybe she gets better later)
"peyton, why... why are you pettier than me?... why are you smarter than me?... why are you so perfect?" - bcgamer162yrCommented
King be like
"..." seeing my actions, Dan didn't say anything. - bcgamer162yrCommentedEarlier, she had made it smaller as to not freak me out or tear me apart. But now, that nice and perfect piece of meat between her legs went beyond intimidating into I've-got-to-get-the-fuck-out-of-here territory.
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Burned body equal hotness
"Hot? In what way?" Everyone said, looking at her, confused. - bcgamer162yrCommentedThis chapter has been deleted.
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Rip food
As the boar soars across the sky, a single thought crosses my mind. "Fuck. I could really go for some tonkatsu curry…" - bcgamer162yrCommented"I can't apologize for a fact," I said with no emotion in my voice.
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Perhaps
Abyssal had a hard time deciding that day whether she was lucky or not. Lucky as she found a solution to her problem. Unlucky as she found the solution to her problem one year later than she should have. Or perhaps… she was simply dumb?