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Decent writing and story concept. Though I would've preferred it to be a tad more descriptive. Overall, it's good. I don't notice any grammatical errors. And the story's pretty good.

I'll be giving this a review tomorrow :P

Ooh, nice

Well, the story's quite interesting. Perhaps a bit too fast-paced but it's all good. Dialogues, though; unrealistic, too detailed, and unnatural. Dialogues can interrupt the story's flow. I suggest you improve in that field.

Unless it's intentional, you're making your main lead sound a tad narcissistic.

Here's a tip on writing, don't be too detailed ._. For instance, your character had just eaten. He said, "Ah, finally. That was some great, juicy meat!" It's low-key creepy and unrealistic, y'know? Don't just straight up say "Ten instant noodles". Instead write, "Maybe I ate too much instant noodles..." or the such.

The story's good and all but I sometimes have a hard time envisioning the scenes. One of the main points of writing is imagery. If anything, it's the author's only problem. At some point in the story, I realized you can't handle making your readers feel the tension of a certain scene. I suggest being more descriptive, not too much as that'll be a bit creepy considering this is a first-person point of view.

Indeed

The story's pretty interesting. The plot is graspable. But the writing could be better. I noticed a few grammatical mistakes that can be easily be fixed by sheer editing. This novel indeed has potential. I shall await your improvement.

Very good grammar and plot. 10/10 would recommend. Characters also top tier.

Eh? The words I use here are what I use every day though.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

If you won't tell me I'll block the said person in discord, leave his server, and never return to the fanfic server.

Can you tell me you're not who I think you are?

The author has an amazing way of words. Though, he could work on his capitalization and grammar. The characters are good and the plot itself is-- just-- interesting.

One word-- impeccable. Great grammar. Characters? Well, the chemistry between them is amazing. The story, though? Well, can't rate that now, can I? After all, there's still one chapter at the moment. But oh well, looking forward to future updates

An interesting beginning that hooked me right in. The characters are relatable. Love them. The story's plot is unique; never read anything like it. I hope to see more of these. Looking forward to your next chapter <3

It's my first time reading a romance novel here on WebNovels. In my own personal opinion, this is probably one of best ones I've read on the site(not that I've read much xD). The characters, though; the characters' personality are so natural. The storyline's interesting and refreshing to read. Honestly, it's just so good