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Pan_Cakes16dCommentedCat pass sheeeeshhh
Yes, he tried to do a jumping pose to be different from the others.- Pan_Cakes8mthCommented
Bro tense please make it consistent, either past or present
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Stank
"MhmmâŚ" The guard waved his hand as he wanted him to leave right away. Kyle stinks for a bit, after all. - Pan_Cakes8mthPosted
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He can teach better
This had major implications! - Pan_Cakes9mthCommented
Pls mommy spare some change
The powerful design spirit harvested so much spiritual feedback every day that most of it went to waste! - Pan_Cakes9mthCommented
Pyramid sceme đ
"It is a similar model to the referral programs of popular games. If people pull in their friends who subsequently spend a lot of money and reach higher levels, they can earn a lot of in-game bonuses!" - Pan_Cakes9mthCommented
Problem is she doesnât know about the compact
"I am aware that you cannot bring out a number of your most powerful inventions, but that still leaves you with plenty of attractive solutions that you can easily leverage to your advantage. The time for us to maintain a low profile and hide in the shadows has passed. If we want to ensure the best future for our children and smoothly promote to first-raters, we must accumulate the wealth, resources and connections to support our rise. We cannot do that fast enough if we continue to scour the deep frontier like scavengers digging into alien tombs." - Pan_Cakes9mthCommented
Who cares just rush to master then star then who can stop you?
This proposal sounded like a poisoned chalice! - Pan_Cakes10mthCommented
Author was forced by Gloriana to write this
He had grown too used to working together with Gloriana. She was truly an ideal design partner in many ways. - Pan_Cakes10mthCommented"While we are not looking to break our existing contracts and overhaul our entire mech setup, we are much more open about the possibility of introducing additional living mechs in our mech roster." Herman said. "Are you interested in designing a custom mech for our mercenary company? You can treat it as a formal commission if you would like."
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It also took a few hard minutes for Gloriana to accept the crushing fact that she had lost the race to Senior. - Pan_Cakes10mthCommented
Ok playing devils advocate she might be more upset then usual because she is high on a bunch of stims and hasnt slept for like a week
After being married to her for roughly a decade, he already figured out that it was in his wife's nature to find a scapegoat to bear all of the blame regardless of whether her suspicions were justified or not. Ves just happened to be her most convenient punching bag. - Pan_Cakes10mthCommented
Dragon mech đ
Gloriana had taken charge of the birthday party from beginning to end. Much of the ground floor of the Royal Mansion as well as its extensive back garden had been transformed into a festive playground themed around dragons. - Pan_Cakes10mthPosted
Read the first chapter, very disappointing for a novel well within the top 5 of this app. The author seems to be writing a imaginative story for a high school project as most of the literary devices used feel very forced and clunky. Dunno if this improves later on in the story but judging by how he couldnât even be bothered to clean up his first chapter, there is little to no hope in any sort of improvement. Also has a tendency to overuse words like try.
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Joan of arc moment, god told me this đđđđ
He called over one of his honor guards who passed him a small totem of Ylvaine. He held it in his palms and concentrated his mind in order to send a query. - Pan_Cakes1yrCommentedBeing drafted into a war and being thrown into a mech regiment that went on to undergo a wild journey through the Vesia Kingdom and the frontier had given him a front-row seat on what life was like for those who fought in the trenches.