All in all I enjoyed the read. Still catching up with most recent chapters but from what I see this series has a lot of potential. I’m particularly interested in the world building!

Shameless review on author behalf. Aware of my shortcomings in raw literature and will continue to improve.

Sounds like something I’d do

OI! I know stuff happens but this story is an absolute masterpiece in the making bro! Can't wait to see chapter 49 one of these days. I'll be waiting!

I've only gotten a bit into chapter two but it seems to be a well designed series. The design detail and multitude of different locations mentioned makes it seem like you've take a lot of time designing the world. Good job, I like the writing.

I like the mysterious vibe to it. The way Zane doesn't react to much makes him seem a little separated from the other side characters which could be good or bad.

Agreed

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Thanks, much appreciated

Wow, that was very deep. I honestly like the interesting take on the subject and think this story could be quite interesting.

Noted, thanks for the feedback and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story should you decide to continue reading.

Yep, this is a shameless review because I am indeed shameless. I rate it 5 stars because this story is gonna be great one all the way through with endless development of the characters. Akai will never stop growing and he'll also stay the same. The character design really comes in during chapter 6 and the story will take off very soon. I upload every day and might miss a day every once in a while because I have school. The world building get better around mid-Arc 2. Trust me.

I really liked the way the author described the world in a first person perspective. I have to be honest, I don't usually like this kind of writing style but I'd say that it's definitely done very well here. Good job!

Agreed. It's definitely a unique story.

I actually really enjoyed this one. I can say that the world building is great from the start and I like the well timed comedy. The characters backstory was understandable and realistic and the writing quality was quite nice. I can't say much about character design because the story has just started so it makes sense that there isn't very much. My rating for the design will change over time and I'm sure that I will be raising that rating.

Wow, I like how you're setting up the story so far.

Thanks, it's been a grind but it was fun.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I thank you for the feedback.

Wow, this chapter was awesome. I really liked the beginning and how you established the MC's personality. 9/10

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