ElRando
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ElRando2mthReplied to Devils_AdvocateCh 10 The Whisper Of The Demons- ElRando2mthReplied to Estonelle
as well it says [img=recommend]
"All kinds of fresh blood for sale. Humans, Elves and Dwarves, we have all kinds of races stocked up here. Virgin(female), virgin(male), homosexual, we have different kinds of genders as well. If you purchase 2000CC at once, you can even enjoy a long-term home delivery service." - ElRando4mthCommented
???
[No. The Bloodline is already part of the host's body. So the host will not lose it. However, the host is currently not able to awaken the effects and abilities of this bloodline. - ElRando4mthCommented
I was thinking that the rules were for safety or something, this guy actually doesn’t trust rules
For all I know, they'd be giving them at least 4 to 5 divine abilities just to increase their winning chances. - ElRando4mthCommented
Why capital t?
The past 5 Thousand years were a testament to its greatest impact in the history of our world. - ElRando4mthCommented
What we call? That doesn’t sound right for some reason, is there a narrator?
Due to his innate talent for learning and remembering what he read instantly, his grades never fell below what was expected from him. Elric had realized to this point that he had the rare case of having what we call Eidetic or Photographic memory. - ElRando1yrCommented
dug is past tense so dig is better in this case instead
Nan Hua then turned her head to look at Hui Ling, who was using his dagger to dug the soil. Even though he looked so serious in digging, Nan Hua knew that he could hear their conversation from that distance. - ElRando1yrReplied to The_Ultimate_Duck
Idk man, i’ve got secondary school level grammar skills
A story about a young girl once deemed a fool by her peers searching for solutions to her mother's illness and ended up becoming an unrivaled expert of medicine and alchemy revered as Alchemist Goddess. - ElRando1yrReplied to Daoistb5IGH0
No one
"I'll be going by the name Jun Hua." - ElRando1yrReplied to JustA_OP_Harem_Guy
I see, thanks
"Different…" Varian chuckled. "Out of all the failed products, this is a successful one." - ElRando1yrCommented
How does mc know this stuff agin?
"Different…" Varian chuckled. "Out of all the failed products, this is a successful one." - ElRando1yrCommented
What are is mote?
"Ah!" Sarah nodded repeatedly and cupped her cheeks with her hands. "70% are gone by now already! And there are still five mote trials. Sounds crazy." - ElRando1yrCommented
lives*?
Enigma stretched her exhausted body and sighed. Her beautiful face was visibly tired. "They want our life because we are the only ones here that didn't go through reincarnation?" - ElRando1yrCommented
Launched*?
On the other hand, the spiders laughed a raging battle against the Undead and left the latter unable to chase the humans any longer. - ElRando1yrCommented
were*?
"Behind these twelve, there are twenty more. And just now, two more are added." Sarah's voice rang. - ElRando1yrCommented
“had first come”
After practicing for the past few months, Nan Hua could control her body much better. While hiding her presence, it was not impossible for her to fool the shadow guards. Her current skill was nothing like when she first come. - ElRando1yrCommented
I feel like the ’a’ is unneeded but idk
Nan Hua: "…" is that really a praise? - ElRando1yrCommented
“Without anyone noticing” or “Before anyone noticed”
"Mhm." Nan Hua nodded and followed Nan Luo. Her eyes peeked at Nan Xin for a moment without anyone noticed. - ElRando1yrReplied to Just_My_Opinion
Aight
"Because you are the one who took away my old family, you are going to be my new family." She poked at my chest. "From now on, you're my elder brother."