I love the story so far. It's not one of those that has an action-packed entry, but I can feel the tensions rising. The characters are well developed- even the side ones. The world background seems limited, but that's because the MC has not been outside the castle walls before- so it kinda makes sense. Overall, I think it deserves a read.

Thank you very much for reviewing and trying out my novel. I know I am a little late in delivering this thank you, but I had some outside troubles. I hope you understand. Once again, thank you, and I wish you a merry read.

That's what I was aiming for!

Thank you very much for the response!

Hello, welcome to my novel. I hope you have an enjoyable time reading through it! Any power stones you could spare are appreciated, but more importantly, I hope you can add this to your library if you like the premise of the novel. I will be building an epic, which you don't want to miss. Thank you for your time.

Hello everyone, this is the author! (which I assume you can already tell.) I hope this novel can satisfy your literary cravings and then some. I will try my best to post at least one chapter a day- but keep in mind that I have no ability to post like seventy a day like other authors. With that in mind, I hope you enjoy it! ((Also drop a power stone or two if you want) Maybe add it to your library too?)

It's not really an MC basis, but there are two main viewpoints with other side characters sprinkled in.

Thank you! I hope to see you again soon!

Yeah, I agree. Thanks for the comment, I will be reaping the idea off of this in my future installments. But, there is a reason why I made the MC trust them so much- albeit (like you said) a little rushed- and I hope you read to the point where it is revealed!

You're welcome, and I hope you enjoy my novel!

Sorry, I just reread my own response, and it did not answer your question. First, you said that he had 100% Affinity. He is 100% APTITUDE. Just want to fix that first. You asked if the drug's effects have no time limit; to this, the answer is yes. The drug does have a time limit, and it is shorter than other people's. This is because the drug is being USED by his body. For normal people, the drug would be used to- for example- 10 or 20%. While the drug is being used, it is not being used to its optimal ability because over 80 to 90% of it is being WASTED via bodily functions. For Vincent, his body is capable to absorb and use ALL OF THE EFFECTS FROM THE DRUG. The only difference is, the DRUG IS BEING USED UP FOR THE SPECIAL ABILITIES rather than HAVING A PORTION OF IT WASTED. I hope this clears up your question, sorry it took so long for me to realize.

Aptitude and Affinity are closely tied together, but they do not influence the amount of time the individual has. Aptitude can do that on RARE occasions when the individual has a higher aptitude than average: Which is above 95%. You will understand this as the novel goes on. A Affinity is almost the same thing, except that it amplifies the effects of one type of evolution pill because the individual's genetics match better than with other pills. You will also understand this very soon. Key takeaways (Just to be sure): Aptitude= The amount of energy (effects of the drug) that an individuals' body can use in the most optimal manner. Having an above-average (The average is high, but again... you'll understand later) aptitude allows one to reap better and more "pure" effects but for a shorter amount of time. This can easily be fixed by taking two of the same pills, Vincent got a backlash because it was his first time, and he used two different types of Pills. Affinity= The body of the individual favoring one version/type of the drug opposed to another. This has nothing to do with time, but can be used as a basis of backlash. If an individual, for example, has a max affinity with the blue, strength pill then taking it over and over again, with a high enough aptitude, will lead to no side effects. I get that he is kind of broken if you look at it from the outside perspective, but I have made it so that Affinity is much harder to have. That's kind of a spoiler, but not really. I hope you keep enjoying my novel, and sorry for the late reply. We must be n different hemispheres because I was asleep when I got the notification :) p.s. (I'm not sure why I'm writing a postscript because it's not really a letter) Don't hesitate the ask me questions!

Hello, that gif made me laugh. Thank you for taking the time to comment, I hope you enjoy my novel! (Or any other novel for that matter!)

Thank you, again, for taking the time to be the FIRST person to review my book. The other ten is my own. I'm not sure if I should be putting that here, but oh well. :) Anyway, I know this is redundant because I already said the same thing to you before, but I want you to know that I truly feel grateful for you to take time out of your day and read my novel. Thank you very much.

Thank you for being the FIRST to actually comment on my novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hello Everyone, thank you very much for picking up my book and giving it a chance. I know that there are thousands of other books- which, debatably, could be better than mine- that you could have chosen, but you chose mine to click. I really appreciate that as it really boosts my ego. (Just joking) Anyway, I wish you a wonderful day with any novel you choose! (I just hope it could be...mine) :)

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