nice

fuk alot of writing mistakes, i should sleep

Im just writing a quick review to ask the author a question aswell as inform some of you lot about the mc's early personality. im only 16 chaps in, but hear me out first, im drawn in by the tags villain, aswell as the combination of story potential that seems to be fun, if u're drawn in by that then the author's answer might be determential for you. but it seems like it will take a long time for him to become "villain like" because right now, he is more of a hero than a villain. he dislikes evil things, he dislikes murder, he dislikes torture, he dislikes the demon'9s ways in general, he seems more of a chara that just wants to live freely witht he one you love while occasionally protecting justice yknow. so imma use this review to ask one questions to make me made up my mind. will he kill innocents? some one that does nothing wrong? maybe even someone that's has been nice to him? or is he someone that only kill "evil human" or someone that's annoying to him, or someone who is in his way?

cheeky lyric from a song eh.

god bless Raos[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Raos is cooking, defo

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

im still coping. RAOS THE GREAT

I pray to raos in these tough time!!

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

I pray for the great Raos.

Just wanna say, for people looking for explanation or smthn, idk why the author didn't just say it directly, but in one of the privleged chap at around 14th nov, he said he is deathly ill, so just wait and see ye, an illness that bad might have some side effect, or in a better scenario, it's school related stuff, it's near the end of the year anyway, so let's not bash my guy too much, and hope he doesn't die early or doing the dirty drop, im really addicted to his work, and i need the supplier to be alive.

people, calm down, all we can do is wait for the best ye, the writer had said that he's ill or smthn, let's just see ye, just hope he doesn't die or smthn.

About the writing quality, i like it, a few mistakes here and there, but it didn't take the enjoyment out of me reading it, and hey, its about what you would expect from a new author. Stability of updates, thus far it's still good, a constant 1ch / day. a bit too little in word count though? or maybe i am just addicted to this novel Story developments, sometimes it can feel slow, especially when the MC is not in that part of the story, but it's still enjoyable to me. Character design, the MC is top tier, i like this kind of cold villainy mc, the MC's family is good as well, and the main heroine is good as well, though we haven't gotten any major action from her. The world background isn't really explained deeply, it just states that there's a couple of continents, and some of the area is corrupted, and in these corrupted areas there lies multiple SSS rank monsters. could be explained more. And i am getting scared that this story will take on a world travelling genre, from the way that there's this time goddess and purple chaos guy. it'll be kind of a bummer if it does, but what can you do.