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Kuzo left then for his home, thinking that he may soon end up becoming the strongest in their household. He would have all the glory in Konoha, and maybe the whole ninja world. He then would start his own clan, and he might even consider starting a polygamous relationship, all for the sake of giving Konoha a strong army that has his genes. After all, he got the bloodlines of those who he killed. He shook his head. The last thing he wanted to have an erection while on his way home.- undeadfan698mthCommented
enough with the crossovers 🤣
[Disciple Might Gai's training mission has been completed successfully. You received the rewards: Chakra +1000, Stone Breathing(Mastery Level)] - undeadfan698mthCommented
i like how everyone dusted off their casio calculator for this
In a mission, a Sharingan user employs their dojutsu to predict enemy movements. Hiroto, a fellow ninja, is tasked with calculating the probability of successfully countering the predictions. If the Sharingan is active for 5 seconds, and the probability of Hiroto countering one second of prediction is given by the function P(t) = 0.2t^3 - 0.6t^2, where t is time in seconds, what is the probability of Hiroto countering the entire 5 seconds of Uchiha predictions? - undeadfan698mthCommented
his move set was great in storm 4 and the tobi character is my favourite
Ever since the beginning of school, Nohara Rin has always taken care of Obito like her own younger brother. [Show some love for Obito-kun in the comments!] - undeadfan698mthCommented
or people who figured you out 👍🏼
In flight, a gust of wind lifted Yuu's blonde smooth hair and blocked her view for a second. She didn't see that the Almighty's brilliant, good-natured smile had turned into a sly grin for a moment. Toshinori was pleased. Very pleased. The plan had worked to perfection. He created a stressful situation for the Mountain Lady, and gave her a lot of support afterward. A simple move that can get you much closer to a person without a huge amount of nuance. Note: doesn't work with soulless and overly selfish people who will absolutely not care about your exertions. - undeadfan698mthCommented
kinky
"See you tomorrow then," Makima yawned. "I'll play with my boys now." - undeadfan698mthCommented
he's an academy student. What enemies does he have?.
So, while observing her classmate go through these grueling training sessions, filled with self-inflicted suffering, Tenten found herself deep in thought during one of their lessons. She realized that there was a true monster walking beside her, someone who showed no mercy, not even to himself or his enemies. - undeadfan698mthCommented
the cringe of calling yourself a beast gave me a liver punch
"Emotions often hinder you in battle, and in the end, you gave in to them, unable to land a hit on me. Insults won't help you when you're weak. Stop taunting the beast. Remember, without composure on the battlefield, you won't survive. Now rest..." Rock enlightened his frightened and battered "protégé" with a calm voice. He finished with a sigh, delivering a final blow to the unconscious Inuzuka by kicking him in the face, breaking his nose and sending him sprawling like a beaten doll. - undeadfan698mthCommented
tone down the young master act of neji he isn't arrogant but depressed because of his status and projects it on others if you can make him see the light and work hard to be a rival of lee where he motivates him to train more intensely with the system challenges it would be greate also please don't introduce romance so eary a budding romance in the war ark would be great also it doesn't have to be ten ten or even a named character a background oc or a medic or any number of random encounters plus tenten and neji is a good ship before his death
Ch 4 Chapter 4: Studying - undeadfan698mthCommented
i think neji would say it doesn't matter or flat out ignored them🤣 this is more like a young master behaviour
"I don't care. He's just ordinary trash from a small family, and there's no way for him to escape his pitiful fate as a weakling," Neji, the one with dark chestnut hair that fell to his shoulders and entirely white eyes with a slight lavender tint, responded with an emotionless and indifferent tone. - undeadfan698mthCommented
finally, a respected taijutsu story. If you go long in your journey, i humbly advise you, aim for the head.
"Lee! You're a true man! It would be blasphemy to disregard your dream! I will become a Taijutsu master in your place, Lee! I will achieve what you've desired all your life! This is my promise!" - undeadfan698mthReplied to jack_crafts
world item breaks level limit
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assuming the world is out to get you off the bat, there's cautious, and there's paranoid😅
So like that one year passed, I got control of my body and motor functions. But I still sh*t and pee my pants. I don't want to seem weird at all. - undeadfan699mthReplied to The_Zen_Boy
it's good as long as you don't make it a lightning armor oc it's gonna be good seriously it's been overplayed too much a hidden technique is not easy to figure out if it was everyone will have it and know how to counter it
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this is getting more and more Chinese
Hyōketsu quietly changed the concept, "If using feet to touch a puppet is an insult to you, don't you always insult your own art when you make a puppet?" - undeadfan6910mthCommented
a rank 1 using rank2 gu and you say he got insufficient resources
Rank 1 Attack Gu - Leaf Blade Gu, Rank 1 Movement Gu - Grass Shoe Gu, Rank 1 Healing Gu - Grass Root Gu, Rank 1 Consumable Gu - Water Jade Gu, Rank 2 Attack Gu - Sword Qi Gu, Rank 2 Defense Gu - Water Armor Gu. - undeadfan6910mthCommented
replace or with and
Deep in the valley, various buildings stand tall or short, spacious and bright, or old and narrow. - undeadfan6910mthCommented
not another lighting mc i can already foretell he will add storm release somehow to use lightning armor
If I had to pick my chakra nature, I would choose Lightning. This nature's very powerful and can have a paralysis effect. It can be very helpful if it lasts for 1 second because that's enough time to decide who wins. My next favorite choice would be Water because it goes well with lightning abilities. Konoha also has Tobirama who is skilled in Water style jutsus. Wind style is very powerful and can be used in many different ways, but no shinobi has reached the level of a kage. When it comes to Fire style, it has a lot of power but can't do as many different things compared to other styles. Amaterasu is the best jutsu, but I am unable to use it. Also, Jiraya was able to seal it using fuinjutsu. And finally, I like the Earth style because it has the strongest defense and some helpful techniques like the Heavyweight-added technique which can be useful for training and flying. - undeadfan6911mthReplied to ghost_316xCh 7 0
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banshe
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