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Basketball after football szn potentially?🙏🏾

It’s been awhile but honestly I’m excited to see how u write from a receivers perspective( I’m a little bias since I played reciever)since until now I feel like you’ve put so much detail into this book. Regardless though I’ve been waiting for this moment I’m not gonna rush you to develop Jackson since I understand that’s just not his character but seeing him on the field or on the track or just doing something is definitely something I’ve been waiting for. I’m also interested In what type of a reciever you plan to build him as whether it’s a fast route runner or an athletic freak that wins every jump ball or contested catch. I know you want highlight the mental part of being an athlete with both of them, but please give Jackson some on field action too it just seems like a waste with all his resources he has available. Btw unless his team are like state champions in their conference it shouldn’t be hard for him to be like varsity slot or 4th string receiver while just playing some JV games at least that’s what happened to me until I was starting consistently. Anyways good chapter as always kee going.

High school Basketball time conditioning,and weights hopefully so Jaya can get some bounce hopefully and speed too.btw is he a five star?

This is similar to assassin reincarnated as a genius swordsman I hope you make a lot of changes so the story ends up different, overall I like your changes though

If ur having trouble the novel gladiators on the Gridiron explains games pretty well

Dude for your first time this was amazing take this from a person who enjoys sports novels and when there’s practically none 🥲 I appreciate the effort u put in to try to understand the sport instead of just winging it. Even though it seems like u don’t like to write sports novels I recommend u write one eventually because I’d definitely read it.

Are u back for good this time 🥹

Nah that’s cool I just keep forgetting this is taking place in Japan.

Yo btw it’s usually freshman, Junior Varsity and finally Varsity. Also you could make tests like agility, 40 yd dash, standing reach, and vertical and endurance could be measured using up downs ( how fast you sprint up and down the court)

Yo great story so far and btw try not to overlook things like conditioning and weightlifting along with pre szn workouts the school usually has since tryouts are always before tryouts and of course we want to see him get faster and stronger and jump higher, you don’t have to go to deep into it if you don’t want to a quick mention would work. Also I feel like since his basketball IQ is high he would be a good passer and of course a good off ball scorer. Not tryna tell you how to write your story I’m just excited for a rare sports novel that’s actually good.Keep Going

The goat is back can’t wait for Highschool Arc also can’t wait for invite camps and peach jam.(btw I don’t have a problem with it but why’d u shut down chances for aau ball)

I get that aau might’ve been too much or tough to write but it seems like a missed opportunity

There moms are actually weird especially Claire

It’s really not that serious relax

He should play a sport he needs extracurriculars to get into Harvard anyways

She’s doing too much ngl and can u even be dropped from a class if you paid for it 💀

Professors don’t care it’s not there problem if students are wasting their own or their parents money, their teaching grown adults 🤷🏾‍♂️

Let him play football or a sport

Jackson really reminds me of Justin Jefferson who wasn’t that good but came from a family of football players had a growth spurt Junior year and started taking it seriously and had a breakout szn. U deserve a medal for this chapter man keep going