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Pizza_and_pants1yrReplied to timepiece94- Pizza_and_pants1yrReplied to MF_THE_BOTH
This is a Fanfic, the aurthors of the original novel/manga would sue lol, and I doubt the author would have the money to hire a artist to draw the first volume
In an effort to increase my earnings to a living wage, I've updated my Patron Goals and come up with a few incentives to try and encourage people to continue supporting me. First and foremost, I will be releasing content based on what my patrons want to read. Once we have achieved my first goal, we will be running polls that last for two weeks at a time. At the end of those two weeks, the prompt that has received the most votes will be the story I focus on for the following two weeks. If people want me to write Fenrir's Journey, I will write Fenrir's Journey. If they want me to write Babel, I will write Babel. If they want me to write a new fanfic filled with smut, I will write a new fanfic filled with smut. Simply put, I will write what I'm paid to write. It's that simple. - Pizza_and_pants2yrCommentedUpon mention of her rather adventurous daughter, the faint melancholy in Lillia's eyes faded away. Before meeting Vahn, she had been the first and only member of her species, the Dream Fawn. With his help, the Dreaming Tree was able to produce seventeen other blossoms, each becoming one of Lillia's sisters. As for Leilani, she was the first natural-born Dream Fawn in existence, an impossibility made flesh thanks to Vahn's 'efforts.'
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Welp the hero’ summoned from the throne of hero’s are only fragments of their original selfs, besides artoria and scathach the other heros you summoned are only memory fragments
"To tell you the truth those are their real names, tell them they are fake they'll kill without even lifting a finger" Shin looked at Issei coldly. - Pizza_and_pants2yrReplied to OP_FAN
Nawh Lancelot is married, his son is the heroic spirt inside mash
(His appearance is similar to Lancelot in Fate). - Pizza_and_pants2yrCommented
grammarly is free lmao
Breathing a sigh of relief, Alex immediately went straight to shower. Clutching the key tightly in his hand, afraid he will lose it after pointing it down. Alex spent the next 10 minutes in the shower washing his whole body, from top to bottom. Depleting half his soap and leaving his skin red raw. Once a certain smell lingers on the body, it will take a long time to wash it off. - Pizza_and_pants2yrPosted
The only reason I'm writing this review is because the author stated that this novel is gonna be the most memorable novel I'll ever read, which I would partially agree if I was able to read pass chapter 14. But there is one memorable thing about this novel, and it's the amount of bots, so far I counted 8. My Review: Writing Quality (5/10), Story Development (5/10), Character Design (2/10), World Background (3/10), Cringe (8/10), Edgy (8/10) Likable Mc: X Likable side Characters: None Grammer Level: Middle School ( No hard feelings dude, I'm not hating )
- Pizza_and_pants2yrReplied to CliffkunLolRekt
Welp China does produce alot of pollution but only in major cities ( china also houses 1.7 billion people) , the west side of china is not even urbanized yet. Not that I’m being ignorant but people from EU and America tends to blame china for all their major problems, like for example the United States the government refuses to change to nuclear power because some big corporations states that nuclear power plants are dangerous, and their coal and oil operatated factories are a better option. ( I lived in NYC for 7 years let me just say this the pollution is so bad that the government bred hundreds of millions of oyster just to clean part of river ).
Clenching both his hands and teeth, Nobu wanted to refute Hitomi's words, but, no matter how he thought about it, she was right. His home country of The United States of America was perhaps one of the best examples of this truth. They were one of the wealthiest and most prosperous countries in the entire world yet the people were always dissatisfied and wanting more. Hell, they were even on the verge of an environmental crisis that threatened the very survival of humanity yet, as high up the ladder as the United States Senate, there were still asshats denying the very existence of global warming... - Pizza_and_pants2yrReplied to Kingsav_Savage
You do realize that drawing manga takes a lot longer then writing novels right?. Unless author is able to make a minimum of $4K a month, it’ simply not worth it.
In an effort to increase my earnings to a living wage, I've updated my Patron Goals and come up with a few incentives to try and encourage people to continue supporting me. First and foremost, I will be releasing content based on what my patrons want to read. Once we have achieved my first goal, we will be running polls that last for two weeks at a time. At the end of those two weeks, the prompt that has received the most votes will be the story I focus on for the following two weeks. If people want me to write Fenrir's Journey, I will write Fenrir's Journey. If they want me to write Babel, I will write Babel. If they want me to write a new fanfic filled with smut, I will write a new fanfic filled with smut. Simply put, I will write what I'm paid to write. It's that simple. - Pizza_and_pants2yrCommented
Wasn’t The MC living inside a apartment?,
This book has been deleted. - Pizza_and_pants2yrReplied to GloriousMilfHunterCh 67 *Not a chapter*
- Pizza_and_pants2yrReplied to JamesDiaz_714
Your over estimatInc USA soldiers lmao, everyone would be on tinder for a week trying to get any girl That they possibly find
This paragraph has been deleted. - Pizza_and_pants2yrReplied to IgorRSAWs
The MC is giving off a vibe that he is writing A daily diary, that’s the feeling I’m Getting at right now. What’s Confusing Is that the story is using a first person point of view/ third person narrator Point if view, and a bit of 4th person point of view. For most book’s authors Tend to stick with only one, some might use FPPOV and TPPOV, but using third person narrator Point of view, just makes readers feel like the MC is the narrator talking about his past. I recommend Reading some Japanese LN the same genre of your novel, it can give you a idea of what type of POV you should use.
- Pizza_and_pants2yrReplied to IgorRSAWs
There will always be good reviews And bad reviews, I’ve Only read up to chapter 5, and the vibe I’m getting From this novel is the same as those generic ( I was a Ex hero and I got reincarnated Into another world with a op system ), not trying to hate or anything, but your writing the novel in first person point of view, and third person narrator Point of veiw and sometimes 4th person point of view, which is very confusing. You have to also check for grammar issues, and the novel is lacking of emotion, Example: ( I made a fireball the size of a rock. I feel excited ), you can also improve the detail of world design, and unique character traits.
- Pizza_and_pants2yrCommented"This is magician class on crack."
- Pizza_and_pants2yrPosted
Saw the harem tag and the title that reminds me of a easy-go comedy manga (Welcome To Japan, Elf-San). Thought it was gonna be the same aspect, but oh boy was I wrong,( keep in mind I only read up to chapter 80 ), the story had a easy going theme for the first 8 chapters, until it’s announced that the elf knight was abused and a slave back in her world, and somehow the world she came from was a game that have been released in the MC’s world. After getting kidnapped by the vampire the MC saves her, and their relationship becomes sour and TBH, the elf was being kinda emo and toxic. Thought they were going to make up, and the happy go setting would continue again, and boy was I wrong again, the elf kept being petty asf and wouldn’t forget about her past. It just wasn’t my cup of tea, I was looking for a happy go novel, but this novel is just hella gloomy and serious.
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- Pizza_and_pants2yrReplied to NAHYAN09
It’s A myth that vampires, suck blood for food and pleasure.
Not only her, but I could also feel another load building up again. Adelle pulls her lips away. "Haah... Ha haa ha..." And suddenly, I felt a sharp sting around my neck, sucking me. While that's happening, I pushed my cock forward and shot out a loud of my hot cum inside of Adelle's warm vagina. "Oohh~! Ahhn~! It's warm~! Faaah~"