love your pen name!

it is funny how tragedy brings characters together.... wonder where Sphinxia is.....no spoilers please.

maybe his ex was younger than him. or maybe she's adopted

There are some typos, but it is easy to figure out. I am enjoying the story very much. My friend and my little girl have me reading the story to them because they love it too. It is child appropriate. there are presently only 13 or 14 chapters but we think it is worth the wait. No I have not read the books this is a fanatic from.

I love that Oreo has feelings, and so does Zach. Otherwise, why did he try so hard to save Sally? I like the softer side of men showing even if they are "acting" all tough, if they care you can see through it. Keep up the story. I am looking forward to it.

Just so you know I am enjoying your story. I just wanted to let you know that auto correct sometime changes Oreos name to Ohio or orio

I like the weirdness. Maybe that would make me weird as well.

Blazuku you got my attention let's see if you can keep it. Good pull in. Looking forward to reading your book.

I love this story. but it was a little confusing when Eligor's name became Eligos. Did it change when he got the beast evolution?