Review Detail of Easy_Tiger in ARISTIA

The writing quality in this one is top-tier. The only thing I could fault was the inconsistent writing of dialogue. Sometimes it comes in novel form with the quotation marks, but other times it reads more like a screenplay. Neither one is wrong, but maybe sticking to one would read better. Other than that, I could find very little to fault this story. Very strong prose with a great flow and a diverse vocabulary. The story is quite engrossing with some great fight scenes, colorful characters and a steamy romance too. Only four chapters so far, but the author has covered a lot of ground. Good, captivating stuff. I highly recommend giving this one a go!