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BigManGuts2yrReplied to Emru“The hero syndrome is a term used by media to describe the behavior of a person seeking heroism or recognition, usually by creating a harmful situation to objects or persons which they then can resolve.”, did he create this situation? No, there are people trying to kill him and anyone who gets in their way. The intelligence of WN readers somehow degrades further and further every day.
Nathaniel gave up and smiled. "If you're going to do this, then you'll need help. Steve, Assemble everyone having B rank or above. If there's going to be a war, then it's going to be a proper one."- BigManGuts2yrReplied to Avit_O_Antidote
Mahavira hall is the main hall or building in a traditional Chinese Buddhist temple, they’re pretty common throughout East Asia.
He walked confidently up to the Shaolin Temple's Mahavira Hall with his head held high. - BigManGuts3yrReplied to BookDevourer87
Ah once again someone tries to apply modern day logic to a completely FICTIONAL story, with FICTIONAL powers.
This was the ability of Dragon Fire Curse. It could instantly ignite every flammable object on fire. Combined with Kzarka's demonic essence and his advanced fire element Qi, the domain fire's temperature could jump from room temperature to 50,000 Celsius in an instant. - BigManGuts3yrReplied to Jay_Murphy_9639
He can’t genius, obviously you didn’t read the skill description of his mind control ability😕
Then suddenly, a huge, brown, scaly worm erupted from the ground like a volcano, completely swallowing Neia whole. Her arm got severed and flew off landing right in front of the group. - BigManGuts3yrPosted
This is the first WN I’ve read on this app and I’ve read around 50 other WN’s inbetween this WN and the review (I used other sites to read WN’s until I actually made an account), so my memory might be a bit hazy in terms of story development and world background. Writing Quality: 3.7/5 If I was the author I’d use a broader range of vocabulary, be more descriptive (quantity), and just have a detailed description (quality) if things like the surroundings, fights, etc. Writing Stability: 5/5 Not much to say here, 7-8 chapters a week consistently which is very good imo. Story Development: 3.2/5 Some plot holes here and there but nothing too major to the point where it’s detrimental to the story. It’s still too early to comment on this since this WN feels like it’ll easily be over 1000 chapters. I just hope the pace doesnt skyrocket out of nowhere and just becomes like your average cultivation novel right before the typical “holy continent” arc. Character Design: 3.5/5 It’s an odd mix of some characters are bland, some have an alright design, and some feel like actual humans. The MC has some dumb things about his personality like being overly paranoid of the system and his sponser. This category was originally going to be a 2.5/5, but after reading the recent chapters it looks like the huge main female cast might finally be getting some character development, so I decided to bump it to a 3.5/5. World Background: 3/5 From what I’ve read so far this has the potential to be a 5/5 if the author plans ahead carefully and doesn’t rush the rest of the story. In general, we haven’t been told that much about the world and beyond it, but it’s clear that the author has plans to talk about everything more in depth later on in the story. This is my completely objective review so even though i gave it an overall rating of 3.6/5 that doesn’t mean that it wasn’t entertaining or that i didn’t enjoy it. When VC reaches the 550 chapter mark I’ll update this review and make it way more detailed and in-depth, but until then the review stays as is. I hope everyone that reads this has a good day, cya💯
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- BigManGuts3yrReplied to Phantomc42
90% of what you mentioned is already extremely common in many other webnovels.
"Magical Equipment is made out of body parts of magical beasts such as scales and teeth that can be found on different planets and from rare ores and materials aswell. They are an imperative part of any soldier's arsenal. When humans were finally able to travel past the milky way galaxy, we discovered that in other galaxies there are really powerful beast-like creatures that provide materials for weapons and armour. These creatures are now known as magical beasts" - BigManGuts3yrReplied to I_Love_Ahi
Oh that’s scientifically impossible? But I guess creating massive wind blades with a fictional type of energy is scientifically possible huh😕
Suddenly Moby's thoughts were interrupted as he heard 5 footsteps 2 Kilometres away headed straight for his direction. - BigManGuts3yrReplied to Phantomc42
Over half of what you mentioned are things that countless other webnovels have/do.
As soon as he saw that person, Moby had terrible flashbacks to his time in his previous school. The person in front of him was by far one of the biggest bullies he had dealt with. His name is Eric Quinn. - BigManGuts3yrReplied to Knives
Yes, in theory they do work, of course our society can’t make one because we don’t have anywhere near the amount of energy required and our level of technology isn’t even close to replicating a teleporter yet. That doesn’t apply to a fictional universe where 26 massive green beams of light appear out of nowhere, can propel human society by at least 200 years, AND can provide an unimaginable amount of energy.
Technological advancements had a massive boom because of the newfound abilities and power sources. Inventions like Teleporters and Holograms were now a normal sight to see throughout the world. - BigManGuts3yrCommented
I like how everyone here is ignoring the fact that it’s literally impossible for any country to monopolize even one of the beams.
Since all the beams of light were more than enough energy for a single nation to even use 1% of its capacity, wars over them did not start and humans banded together to fix many of the problems plaguing the entire world since its inception. - BigManGuts3yrReplied to Earthshaker34
No, the system said he couldn’t change their innate skills until he becomes a true immortal.
Special Ability: can burst up to 2 times its maximum speed. (10 second duration, can be upgraded) - BigManGuts3yrReplied to shadowstriker102
The author goes to great lengths to explain quite a lot of things in detail, so it’s pretty surprising to hear these questions when he thoroughly answered them about 30 times in the first 2 dozen chapters🤨
"Hairy Corruption has killed a Common Vampire... host has gained 10 xp!" - BigManGuts3yrReplied to Conquerer007
Exactly
Sikong Cui knew that Zhu Cheng wanted to extort some high-quality herbs from her, but that didn't mean she wasn't curious about Yun Jhin's battle power, some herbs weren't worth much to her as she could have as many as she wanted, being the prized daughter of the matriarch of the house. - BigManGuts3yrReplied to Ihatethisite
Get a life, Jesus😕
In such a patriarchal society like the cultivation one, marrying off a daughter wasn't of high importance, but who she was married off too was important. - BigManGuts3yrReplied to CantWrite
I see you haven’t been reading the past 75 chapters with your eyes open huh😕
The man's eyes started to darken as he saw his own heart being extracted from his chest, Yun Jhin opened his maw like a deadly predator and ate the heart then licked his fingers, the lifeless body dropped to the ground and Yun Jhin took his spatial ring, no one saw him doing the killing so even if the man had some important background how could they pin the blame on him? - BigManGuts3yrReplied to kabanCh 73 Fighting the elements (part 3)