You can take away future king and queen? and punish them? and more importantly why didn't they resist or do anything.

What's wrong with green hat?

Well you don't have to draw it just take some illustration from other artists and give them credit.

I recommend that you add a cover image for your novel, it will bring more attention.

I haven't accomplished anything and I am 22 years old.

question three reminds of my middle school days

128 MB RAM really!! Is that guy living 90's?

Wasn't his chained light something spell at high level profiency

That's some ominous family moto you got there

It seems like you have wrong uderstanding about novel prize winner's.

An advice your lacks personality and need other things such as why is beast master needed and what role does it play in evolving beasts and fights

Story is alright it's just there are very simple that can be improved like making system dialogue in bracket like this [ Welcome, Host ] or making first letter capital at start of sentences and stuff. Otherwise, good work and do you translate this manually or do you guys use AI? Just curious.

Because you nothing else to do

exactly although it might be possible for us to become in very early stages of type 2 civilisation and might be possible to make few barely habitable planet

I just want to ask who is teaching these kids? A psychopath perhaps?

sorry for nitpick but i did the math and his should be 11 something except for agility

It makes no sense to not change seats, I mean why bring trouble to yourself for almost no reason? Specially when you're weak