This is cute so far! I look forward to seeing how you develop the story.

I am thoroughly enjoying this story! The world building excites my curiosity, the story thus far (chapter 40) is interesting and wholesome, the main character is written relatively realistically for his age and goals, and the pacing is pleasant for a relaxing read. The main drawbacks of the book is some editing things that are obviously autocorrect problems and that the main character is a bit of a MarySue, but that also makes some sense for the story and leads to a currently relaxing story.