he put himself in a position where they could have drugged him and kept him asleep there is nothing he can do when he is not awake and if he starts to become immune to the drugs they can just increase the dosage or cut off all his limbs and keep doing it every time they start to grow back and there are at least 3 more ways that I can think of to keep him a presioner

that is soooo dumb he just let them know he's immortal and can be harvested for eternity and expect us to just believe they will let him go. no they would lock him up because they can get all the merrow they want from him and all the organs they want such a stupid choice

the person who wrote this is 5 years old and I will not read it any more it's just very disappointing I tried but I just can't

at least finish a part of the story before you move on to the next part

you should have made him join the world government to get stronger so he can do what he wants, not a stupid not thought out plan of not being a criminal because joining the world government makes him a criminal

so the main character decides to join the world government because pirates are criminals, but the world government inslaves people and kills so many innocent people, yeah that makes sense 🤔 .....................not

just horrible made the Mc too week and he knew the usj incident was going to happen and he did nothing and then he want to act like a cry baby when it's over Luffy was just a kid and Mc is a reincarnated person who knows the full potential of his power but does nothing but whine that he is week until he has no other choice but to get stronger or not be able to go to the academy so don't whine when people complain about your story especially when you say you did your research

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You need to add more of the Mc just some constructive criticism and I'm not reading this again it was a disappointment

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this one