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I hate anti-hero’s characters, this half way shit is annoying. Specially when all they do is save girls, most of this authors are just some betas simps that have never dealt with real females.
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Author why you got to give mc moral justification to kill people. Come on he is a villain and doesn’t need moral justification to kill. In fact it just makes us the readers loose faith in the protagonist, because we expect a villain mean evil person that kills indiscriminately without needing him to be in the right while killing people. This is just me giving constructive criticism because I have seen so many times good dark novels die out because the protagonist who supposedly evil goes round saving little girl 👧, ugh it all ways the girls. Please author don’t bring in sexism, like favouring female characters and all the males are all ways being the bad guy that mc end up killing 😑. This is also another thing that makes a lot of viewers stop ✋ reading novels, and other than that the novel it been great so far. Thank you
The author keeps on trying to emphasize that mc is not maniac and prioritizing benefits. I get it prioritizing benefits it very logical thing to do and what our Mc should be doing yet I feel like his changing Adruis personality form evil and crazy witch is one of this novel best point and makes this novel special then other novel to a neutral guy who only does evil for benefit. Yes I personally don’t have any problem mc pursuing benefits but Adruis is losing what makes him so special by acting so logical witch is insanity. I mean he ca be cunning and calculative for benefit and be insane and same time.