Take your time, dude. Write when you feel like it, discontinue if you feel like you can’t just inform us if thats the case. you don’t need to feel pressured

I got the concept and it just validates my point Male main character + female captures = galge Female main character + male love = otome The fact that you add adventures and RPG like features is an entirely different matter. its still not an otome game by definition

I feel like what you have in mind is a galge. an otome game has a female lead and male love interests generally. Your game has a ‘hero’ and ‘beautiful girls’ which sounds like a galge

He pointed his finger at his smaller finger?

I thInk its a good start, don’t worry too much. Just focus on the story and don’t mess up grammar and you’re all good

Search on google, this noevel has been completed, and is one of the best gender bender novels

I’m not saying survive is the wrong decision in any way. my point is thatshe already Accepted her death in Original world. temporarily puting it on hold is not the wronf decision, but just accepting it is just unsatisfying

I guess s/he doesnt want to wear those feminine revealing clothes?

Great. i hope the romantce Partner is male. I’m m sick of overflowimg yuri this platform has

I guess its okay that she made plans for the worst case scenario but still, its not like she died, this all hapenned outta nowhere. shouldn’t her goal be to find out what hapenned and try to return to her world?

Another yuri, huh. There isn’t a yuri tag on your novel

reality is hard

so, I was looking for a figure I could imagine as MC and I think I found the perfect picture

a healthy girl, indeed

for gender bender fans, this truly was a novel with great potential. it's a shame that this was discontinued. there's only so many good gender bender content and it's a shame that novels with potential are dropped just like that

she has better stats now, I think a few shallow bite marks would be possible even if it's this OP elf

for someone who has never even seen 'it' she sure knows her stuff

The ship is sailing smoothly

Hmm..... I think the story is a bit underwhelming considering it’s a gender bender. The mc has close to no problem accepting he’s a girl now. He also doesn’t mind dating boys now. The resistance is the key part in gender bender in my opinion, and without it, it has no life to it. You don’t rate a romance novel high more no matter how excellent it’s action scenes are unless it has good romance. On the contrary, focusing more on action would lower your rating since people started it for romance. Similarly, if the gender bender part is missing in a gender bender novel, I don’t think I can rate it high

Yeah so I noticed that for the last few chapters, kitty is able to eat normal food. I thought she could only drink milk, or that wasn’t the case?