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Donât you mean Lucian Wheeler? Because thereâs no Watters in stranger things.
Lucas must be dumb as a brick if he is only realizing that now
Thanks for the chapter but author please fix this! If you rewatch the Enel you will see that not only does he levitate but has 2 types of flying: a partial elementization where only his lower body turns to lightning, slowly flying, and a full body elementization, where he flashes and vanishes into a thin stream of lightning.
Wait. My memories of the flashback episodes are a little fuzzy but didnât Kakashi join ANBUâs Root division straight out of the academy? Before leaving Root and working directly under the Third, before being placed into Team Minato?
But half-kneazles are common pets amongst wizardkind. Dumbledore wouldnât need to reference Newtâs book.
Isnt this suppose to be the Redwyne Fleet?
Author, donât you mean the Arbor?
Can the MC at least try not to make it so obvious that heâs not an NPC? Eternal was already fine as is. Itâs not too late to take this decision back and edit this part of the story.
Seriously one of the handful of non-garbage fanfics out here, which Iâm sadly guilty of. People who criticize the epistolary style of writing must have never read real books before, because itâs nothing new. My only gripe is having to find out you were using the book when I kept imagining everything in its tv format for most of the story. This was a joy to read.
As a reader, somehow I feel exasperated when I see the words bread and salt together... and laugh at the same time..
This is my favorite LOM FF so far. MC is just strong enough to keep the story interesting. And the author does his best to follow the style of the original story. Certain readers need to understand how immensely tempting it is for FF writers to make their MCs overpowered at every stop and turn. The fact that he hasnât speaks volumes of his self control. In my opinion, a world building style that doesnât break immersion because of ridiculous AU elements is what truly separates a good story from the rest of the garbage.
Oh thank god
Dear Author, I feel absolutely miserable. I regret ever coming across your novel and regret the fact that I can not stop reading. At least I refuse to stop until I either read about Ryan dying in some horrific accident or Ben living a vastly better life than Dawn⌠in other words.. well played đđ˝