Smile_Kumar
Writing
of reading
139
Read books
regret and frustration
as good as dead
Like several years later. And the spoiler was unnecessary
3yrs, exactly the time period since this chapter was posted. And yet the mistakes aren't corrected. Author, either take time to edit the past chapters or hire an editor to do it for you.
The lines in this paragraph doesn't make any sense. Hire an editor already if you can't express the dialogues properly.
losing your one night stand with Camille too
potential enemies
wasn't the digestor's soul memory making fearless till now.
They seemed as martial artists to you and now they are pro vr players
the results would be frightening
whose fingers were twisted unnaturally
it was really uncomfortable for someone who usually slept on a soft comfy bed like him.
Fire fighter
Any woman around them is not safe or don't let your gaurd down around them, they are dangerous.
And Dude hasn't used that aether stat on his weapons yet.
Dismissed? dude that means you can leave. At ease is suitable here.
nice
Knowledgeable would be better than learned